A bit complicated because depending on the reader they are both terribly wrong. This story involved something of an inversion in that who wanted the more ample sex life was the wife, and the interesting detail being that only after the breakup the husband discovers that he initially allowed himself be programmed like he was a daughter and that his acceptance was coupled with strong but unconcious feeling that the purpose of sex was to reproduce.
Obviously his discussion of the reality to his mind has bigger impact than knowing truth will upset some people. All in all, an enjoyable and thought provoking story!
Well you turned it around and they got back together. But let me say, Even though I am a man, I was really starting to hate this SOB and was really hoping he got a lot more pain for his stupid male ego. But some how you turned him and hopefully he understands that a marriage is a partnership and not a dictatorship. But he has a long way to go. Hopefully they make it.
Great story and the little longer length of the story was great. But waiting for the next chapter is always a pain.
Thanks.
Morefunn
Yes it was well written as always, but the husband is egotistical arsehole. He quite happily carried on having sex with his female friends and he cared nothign for what his wife thought about it, koay so she fucked up but I think she actually comes out of this with far more dignity than the husband. but they seem happy again now so good luck to them. I hope they do make it. Nice story JPB, far better than some of your other stories.
I'm glad they ended up together. Robbie was an arrogant ass. He deserved to be told off by his wife for his rigid and unrealistic attitudes about sex. Probably in a better manner than she did however. He still maintains is arrogance right up until the end with his pronouncements about their sex life. What a crock. He's lucky that she accepted his screwing around with 3 other women. I agree with his reasoning but it's a hard pill for her to swallow and yet she did so graciously. Now she really cut down his performance in bed so she deserves some payback but the fact that he was with 3 other women and learned stuff that she wasn't able to teach him seems like payback enough. It was good to see that he went down on her right away. I got the feeling that he was just trying to make a point with his pronouncement rather than planning out an extended punishment and I guess I was correct.
The story was good, but the ending you came up with was very good. Like others, I was beginning to really dislike the guy but in the end he showed a little humanity after all.
I don't believe for one minute the cunt wasn't fucking around from the minute she left.
And, regarding her getting pregnant right after their reconciliation: What better way for HER to gain the upper hand than to get pregnant. She kicked him OUT, fuck the bitch.
Upon re-reading, I find I'm confused as to her first pregnancy. They were dating pretty heavily for several weeks if not months.
I suspect that the "baby" she went away to have might have been his. It's not a biggie as she was a total bitch anyway.
With the INCREDIBLY harsh words she said to him upon leaving, I can SEE NO WAY that any man of honor and pride could swallow her triple distilled bullshit and take her back.
It's not like he wasn't getting enough attention.
I really hate stories where the guy has to eat shit to reconcile.
In JPB's world there are 5 women to every man so naturally they are all desperate to have the man regardless of how much an ass he is.
In the real world for ages 18 to 25 (the age range of Gail and Rob) there are 6 single guys for every 5 single girls and the guys have additional competition from older higher income guys.
It is true that the star QB and movie stars have women chasing them. However, Rob is just a good looking guy and to have a chance for women he has to be charming and nice. Instead he is an ass. No way, no how would Gail put up with his abuse. Gail being a very pretty girl only has to bat her eyes to have good looking guys chasing after her.
That is just the way it is; young women are really in the catbird seat. They seem to be getting whatever they want. Now by age 40 the demographs change and, for that age group, the men have the advantage and get what they want.
By bitch I mean the husband this is a case where I would completely understand her fucking around on him the guy is a complete assholes the kind I'd like to meet in an abandoned alley so I could beat some sense into him. Nice job on the writing but I really think Gail deserved some justice.
He's an ass I don't know why she'd want him back... It was ok to eat skanks out without hesitations, not knowing them sluts could be carrying around syphilis & shit but he gave her shit about trying it on her... Yeah I really didn't Like the husband.. He's fucking married women, women that are attached but he wasn't willing eating some pussy due to some idiotic ideas that he has about marriage, sex & love....I don't know why she'd Want him back...
So what do we have? We have a former slut who left her husband because he sucked in bed. We also have a former newcomer who was trained by cheating wives and fiance's. Rob was lucky no jealous husband or boyfriend caught him.
So that makes makes two lousy people. They deserve each other. Fuck 'um.
Damn, you finally wrote a story about a husband dumped upon by his wife (though she was stupid how she handled it) for a reason. However, he didn't run crying but had some decent steel cahones and dealt with the problem while receiving some very enjoyable hands on training. Finally, he accepts her apologies but still keeps those balls of steel intact. A great story!
I undertsand his anguish, his nightmare and I understand his finally getting around to great sex BUT - when she constantly tried to talk to him, convince him to try something different, he tuned her out. He, by history, should have asked mommy while he was still married. Don't blame her for walking out. He turned out to be less of a man than she thought he was - just sat there and felt sorry for himself, not once angry and determined to get his wife back.
Biggest disappointment I had in him is when, after she disclosed her past conduct and plans to him, was when he dictated like a Real Asshole 'Where the Rabbit Ate The Cabbage' to her and talked down to her and issued an ultimatum...a real jerk. Granted, he had been hurt badly, but she confided in him and all she asked was he consider her plight, her realization that her silly plan was idiotic and wished he would take her back and be married again...she placed no demands - only apolgies and hope, no need to verbally brutalize her so...over the top, this was not the character of the man she had loved so much.
His conduct was selfish and childish and when he insisted she wait to answer him, I think she should have stood up to him and told him - again, she screwed up, was celibate, understood his anguish and conduct and that she would abide by his WISHES (Not Dictates) and if he still was gruff and overbearing she should have relized that she had created a selfish, self serving beast, signed the papers and walked away sad but walked away - this was not her husband.
You bever cease to amaze us Bob but, good story again, just didn't like the character of the guy, the guy who used to be a man with compassion!
would she want him back. He refused to fuck his wife in anything but missionary and when she leaves him goes out and does everything he refused his wife with various other women. What would the Burn the bitch brigade call a wife who behaved like Rob.
the whore was engaged to him but she went off had another man's baby, fucked some guy the minute she was healed from child birth and then married him. told him he was no good in the sack, leaves telling him to divorce her, then wants him back and says she has not been fucking anyone and now wants to be prgnant. this is a JPB special like only he can write. a cuck and a slut and cuck takes her back.
A woman who is ENGAGED and runs off having sex with all and sundry is hardly a keeper. The fact she got preggers, hid the fact and gave me a fait accompli afterwards (all while screwing as she lost the 'baby weight') would have pretty much ended the engagement for me.
Heck, giving away her flesh and blood is iffy. Yes, she's giving it away to be with me...but it's her flesh and blood! If she can do that to her KID, what could she do to me?
We have the answer to that. The Baby Trap she's setting right now is very worrisome.
He set boundaries. He kicked her to the curb. But he was stupid to take her in the first place.
This woman has told him he's no good in bed. She's told him to divorce her. She's told him she lied and was using birth control to avoid getting pregnant. She walked out on him. How many times does she have to smack him upside his head for him to understand that she's a manipulative bitch and that he's SO much better off without her? And then he plays around with all these other skanks that demonstrate how little he can trust women. And he STILL goes back to his wife. And wants to have kids with her. Unbelievable. I think when he won the Purple hearts he must have had head injuries that left him unable to think and reason clearly. That being said - another well written story by JPB.
Something wrong with JPB that his husbands always follow the same pathetic pattern. He says it's because he is a romantic. But this isn't love or romance is pathological.
Great story as usual from JPB. I almost was ready to vilify the husband for being such an asshole when he was ready to take her back. When you are ready to take back someone who has wronged you, the need or revenge should no longer be a motivator for you. After finishing the story, I see that he used the stipulations as a test to see if she learned anything. I was glad that they got back together. And to people who feel that he is a wimpy cuck, they obviously didn't pay attention to the story. Why do some people feel reconciliation equals wimpy cuck? If you would rather live a lonely life with your pride than forgive someone who has gone through hell to prove to you that they can be trusted, then you can do that. If being a wimpy cuck means that I can take a break from my marriage, have all kinds of sex with multiple women, then get back together with my wife and have her GRATEFUL, then I would be a wimpy cuck 10 out of 10 times.
I think Rob was an insufferably arrogant nincompoop
The reason Gail left him was perfectly reasonable. And within a week of her leaving, he was doing all the things he refused her. He sounds like the "man is the lord and master" type of guy that all women dislike.
If I'm not mistaken, she did admit to fucking other guys and getting pregnant while they were engaged. While it is understandable that he gets back with her after a horrible misunderstanding, the pre wedding shit was never discussed.
He's too emotionally stunted. I guess women do some pretty stupid things but getting back with this idiot shouldn't be one of them. Mommy dearest should have been bitch slapping him each time she met up with him. He'll be out looking for strange inside of a year... because he does want a master/slave relationship with his wife
Well-written story, but emotionally unpleasant for me because Rob was such a turd. I would have hoped Gail would have dumped him. You know, he never did admit he was wrong. She told him he was crap in bed, well guess what? He was, he was an uptight, close-minded, judgmental, unloving jerk. He never even had the perspective to admit that he was wrong about all of that and he never apologized to her for making her feel like a pervert for having normal sexual interests.
Everything about the story was great but the lead character was an antagonist rather than a protagonist. Again, what a turd!
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Anonymous10/20/14
I liked it 5*****
Can I get Marge's number, my Wednesday evenings are free.
Gail Sue sucks and so does his mother and his sister for both of them taking her side.
I love it when people who should know better think that what they want for you is best for you. Gail Sue was trying to negotiate right up until Bob had him nut up and take her back. I suspect the real reason that he wouldn't eat GS's pussy was because it was full all the time. Sounds to me like she was an absolute slut and that doesn't change just because she got married. Especially since he "didn't do it" for her.
He was a dick for fucking that married woman, but the way he was probably raised and his experience with Gail Sue taught him that pussy was pussy, even on a cow. Or a married woman who didn't want to give up her gravy train. I guess Bob doesn't know about any straight down the middle women. But damn, the boy can write. I just don't like his penchant for slut loving husbands who forgive anything to get the bitch back so she can humiliate him some more.
"I am serious Rob. No man except you has touched me since I put your ring on my finger.”
Huh? She admitted she had sex for 6 months while she was in Atlanta, and she went a week after he gave her a rung!
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Anonymous07/18/15
So the first thing she wants reentering this uncertain relationship is to bring a child into it?
And he's OK with that? Two cartoon characters about whom we couldn't care less. The only person I feel sorry for is the kid who will have these two whacko's for parents!
you would think he doesnt have a chance. TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous09/25/15
Very good until the trainwreck at the end
Why would he believe a word coming out of her mouth? She trashes him, leaves in a huff and then decides she wants him back and that she can live with missionary sex forever? Too big a turnaround. Especially from a woman with her history. She lied to him and then went and had a baby. Now he's supposed to accept that she's not been seeing other men, even after she got the divorce papers? That doesn't track. She's a manipulative liar. End of story. The divorce goes forward to its conclusion. And have some harsh words with Mom. No more setups. Baby my ass.
He's a freakin freakazoid!!! From the beginning his thoughts about sex were just weird! She had every right to leave him since she had tried over and over to get him to try new stuff and THEN he just gives in and does anything any other woman wanted to do to him after she leaves? Evil little hypocritical creep!!! I understand her thoughts about leaving, trying to shake him up. Maybe not the best choice but at least she was trying. And then he never got the dang point! His little ego was so injured that he never once thought that he was ever anything but perfect!! She should have kept running as far away from him as possible!!! Sorry, I'll quit railing now!! lol
If you want a reconciliation, write a story where there does appear to be some slight belief that they can reconcile. There is no rationale for reconciliation in your story 1*
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Anonymous10/28/15
Wow, what a douche bag!
He absolutely refuses to pleasure his wife then goes right out and does it with other women. He wasn't a hypocrite, he was an asshole! How any woman could love a jackass like that is unbelievable. The first chapter was the same standard cliche' and the other chapters just proved over and over again what a miserable fuck this guy is.
This was a terrible story!
So I'm not the only one who thinks Rob is a selfish, uptight, arrogant asshole. Gail Sue was right, as much as fictional characters go. And as far as Rob's character, he's almost a caricature.
Yeah, don't think I'll be browsing through JPB's repertoire again. Most of his characters need years of help from mental health professionals.
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Anonymous11/10/15
what a hypocritical scumbag piece of shit
Any wife treating her husband the way he did her would be out on her ass with a hella nasty BTB. Congratukations on making one of the worst and most undeserving ceating whore men ever.
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Anonymous01/15/16
Wow, the comments on this site on this, and other stories!
That's right, "stories". There just stories dumb asses, "stories", not real life. You need to move to another site, or at least, "shut up"! This one was pretty good, with a take on relationships that I hadn't read before.
Gail:
"I thought that you would do whatever you had to do to keep me."
He let her have sex with other men while wearing his engagement ring.
Have another man's child while wearing his engagement ring.
And after that still marry her.
So tell me;
Why wouldn't she have reason to believe he would do anything and everything to keep her?
English
Working on a baby?!?
With all those question marks still hanging over their relationship?
Yeah, I know -- it's just a story.
At least your characters....
....always seem to deserve each other!
Great Job
Rob,
Finally the final chapter. I'd say it'sa great story, but I hate being obvious. Ah hell, Bob, it was indeed a great story. I do like you longer stuff.
Matt Moreau
Good Story
A bit complicated because depending on the reader they are both terribly wrong. This story involved something of an inversion in that who wanted the more ample sex life was the wife, and the interesting detail being that only after the breakup the husband discovers that he initially allowed himself be programmed like he was a daughter and that his acceptance was coupled with strong but unconcious feeling that the purpose of sex was to reproduce.
Obviously his discussion of the reality to his mind has bigger impact than knowing truth will upset some people. All in all, an enjoyable and thought provoking story!
Not Bad, Not Bad At All
Well you turned it around and they got back together. But let me say, Even though I am a man, I was really starting to hate this SOB and was really hoping he got a lot more pain for his stupid male ego. But some how you turned him and hopefully he understands that a marriage is a partnership and not a dictatorship. But he has a long way to go. Hopefully they make it.
Great story and the little longer length of the story was great. But waiting for the next chapter is always a pain.
Thanks.
Morefunn
Still not sure about this story.
Yes it was well written as always, but the husband is egotistical arsehole. He quite happily carried on having sex with his female friends and he cared nothign for what his wife thought about it, koay so she fucked up but I think she actually comes out of this with far more dignity than the husband. but they seem happy again now so good luck to them. I hope they do make it. Nice story JPB, far better than some of your other stories.
A good story with a good ending
Too bad he is the marrying type, he had the best of both worlds.
Now that Gail is back she will probably keep him fucked until he hasn't any strength to fuck other women.
Poor guy will have to just go home and fuck his wife instead of fucking the girls in the office.
Oh well if it ever comes to the time where she doesn't want to fuck he can always get his friends with benefits back.
Thanks for the good story
Good Story
But it deffinately needs a follow-up.
how did things go did they stay together or was there another Dis-agreement that tore them Apart?
Good ending
I'm glad they ended up together. Robbie was an arrogant ass. He deserved to be told off by his wife for his rigid and unrealistic attitudes about sex. Probably in a better manner than she did however. He still maintains is arrogance right up until the end with his pronouncements about their sex life. What a crock. He's lucky that she accepted his screwing around with 3 other women. I agree with his reasoning but it's a hard pill for her to swallow and yet she did so graciously. Now she really cut down his performance in bed so she deserves some payback but the fact that he was with 3 other women and learned stuff that she wasn't able to teach him seems like payback enough. It was good to see that he went down on her right away. I got the feeling that he was just trying to make a point with his pronouncement rather than planning out an extended punishment and I guess I was correct.
Nice Work
The story was good, but the ending you came up with was very good. Like others, I was beginning to really dislike the guy but in the end he showed a little humanity after all.
Fred
I don't believe for one minute the cunt wasn't fucking around from the minute she left.
And, regarding her getting pregnant right after their reconciliation: What better way for HER to gain the upper hand than to get pregnant. She kicked him OUT, fuck the bitch.
Upon re-reading, I find I'm confused as to her first pregnancy. They were dating pretty heavily for several weeks if not months.
I suspect that the "baby" she went away to have might have been his. It's not a biggie as she was a total bitch anyway.
With the INCREDIBLY harsh words she said to him upon leaving, I can SEE NO WAY that any man of honor and pride could swallow her triple distilled bullshit and take her back.
It's not like he wasn't getting enough attention.
I really hate stories where the guy has to eat shit to reconcile.
Unrealistic
In JPB's world there are 5 women to every man so naturally they are all desperate to have the man regardless of how much an ass he is.
In the real world for ages 18 to 25 (the age range of Gail and Rob) there are 6 single guys for every 5 single girls and the guys have additional competition from older higher income guys.
It is true that the star QB and movie stars have women chasing them. However, Rob is just a good looking guy and to have a chance for women he has to be charming and nice. Instead he is an ass. No way, no how would Gail put up with his abuse. Gail being a very pretty girl only has to bat her eyes to have good looking guys chasing after her.
That is just the way it is; young women are really in the catbird seat. They seem to be getting whatever they want. Now by age 40 the demographs change and, for that age group, the men have the advantage and get what they want.
I still want to burn the bitch
By bitch I mean the husband this is a case where I would completely understand her fucking around on him the guy is a complete assholes the kind I'd like to meet in an abandoned alley so I could beat some sense into him. Nice job on the writing but I really think Gail deserved some justice.
He's an asshole!
I don't like him.
He's an ass I don't know why she'd want him back... It was ok to eat skanks out without hesitations, not knowing them sluts could be carrying around syphilis & shit but he gave her shit about trying it on her... Yeah I really didn't Like the husband.. He's fucking married women, women that are attached but he wasn't willing eating some pussy due to some idiotic ideas that he has about marriage, sex & love....I don't know why she'd Want him back...
So they're back together
So what do we have? We have a former slut who left her husband because he sucked in bed. We also have a former newcomer who was trained by cheating wives and fiance's. Rob was lucky no jealous husband or boyfriend caught him.
So that makes makes two lousy people. They deserve each other. Fuck 'um.
HA
Finally!
Damn, you finally wrote a story about a husband dumped upon by his wife (though she was stupid how she handled it) for a reason. However, he didn't run crying but had some decent steel cahones and dealt with the problem while receiving some very enjoyable hands on training. Finally, he accepts her apologies but still keeps those balls of steel intact. A great story!
Mommas' Boy
He's an educated ass!
I undertsand his anguish, his nightmare and I understand his finally getting around to great sex BUT - when she constantly tried to talk to him, convince him to try something different, he tuned her out. He, by history, should have asked mommy while he was still married. Don't blame her for walking out. He turned out to be less of a man than she thought he was - just sat there and felt sorry for himself, not once angry and determined to get his wife back.
Biggest disappointment I had in him is when, after she disclosed her past conduct and plans to him, was when he dictated like a Real Asshole 'Where the Rabbit Ate The Cabbage' to her and talked down to her and issued an ultimatum...a real jerk. Granted, he had been hurt badly, but she confided in him and all she asked was he consider her plight, her realization that her silly plan was idiotic and wished he would take her back and be married again...she placed no demands - only apolgies and hope, no need to verbally brutalize her so...over the top, this was not the character of the man she had loved so much.
His conduct was selfish and childish and when he insisted she wait to answer him, I think she should have stood up to him and told him - again, she screwed up, was celibate, understood his anguish and conduct and that she would abide by his WISHES (Not Dictates) and if he still was gruff and overbearing she should have relized that she had created a selfish, self serving beast, signed the papers and walked away sad but walked away - this was not her husband.
You bever cease to amaze us Bob but, good story again, just didn't like the character of the guy, the guy who used to be a man with compassion!
Why on earth
would she want him back. He refused to fuck his wife in anything but missionary and when she leaves him goes out and does everything he refused his wife with various other women. What would the Burn the bitch brigade call a wife who behaved like Rob.
the whore was engaged to him but she went off had another man's baby, fucked some guy the minute she was healed from child birth and then married him. told him he was no good in the sack, leaves telling him to divorce her, then wants him back and says she has not been fucking anyone and now wants to be prgnant. this is a JPB special like only he can write. a cuck and a slut and cuck takes her back.
Thanks For Sharing*****
I really think this is a great story.
Not a cuck but..
A woman who is ENGAGED and runs off having sex with all and sundry is hardly a keeper. The fact she got preggers, hid the fact and gave me a fait accompli afterwards (all while screwing as she lost the 'baby weight') would have pretty much ended the engagement for me.
Heck, giving away her flesh and blood is iffy. Yes, she's giving it away to be with me...but it's her flesh and blood! If she can do that to her KID, what could she do to me?
We have the answer to that. The Baby Trap she's setting right now is very worrisome.
He set boundaries. He kicked her to the curb. But he was stupid to take her in the first place.
OH NO! HE CAVES!!!!!
This woman has told him he's no good in bed. She's told him to divorce her. She's told him she lied and was using birth control to avoid getting pregnant. She walked out on him. How many times does she have to smack him upside his head for him to understand that she's a manipulative bitch and that he's SO much better off without her? And then he plays around with all these other skanks that demonstrate how little he can trust women. And he STILL goes back to his wife. And wants to have kids with her. Unbelievable. I think when he won the Purple hearts he must have had head injuries that left him unable to think and reason clearly. That being said - another well written story by JPB.
There really is
Something wrong with JPB that his husbands always follow the same pathetic pattern. He says it's because he is a romantic. But this isn't love or romance is pathological.
Great story as usual from JPB. I almost was ready to vilify the husband for being such an asshole when he was ready to take her back. When you are ready to take back someone who has wronged you, the need or revenge should no longer be a motivator for you. After finishing the story, I see that he used the stipulations as a test to see if she learned anything. I was glad that they got back together. And to people who feel that he is a wimpy cuck, they obviously didn't pay attention to the story. Why do some people feel reconciliation equals wimpy cuck? If you would rather live a lonely life with your pride than forgive someone who has gone through hell to prove to you that they can be trusted, then you can do that. If being a wimpy cuck means that I can take a break from my marriage, have all kinds of sex with multiple women, then get back together with my wife and have her GRATEFUL, then I would be a wimpy cuck 10 out of 10 times.
I think Rob was an insufferably arrogant nincompoop
The reason Gail left him was perfectly reasonable. And within a week of her leaving, he was doing all the things he refused her. He sounds like the "man is the lord and master" type of guy that all women dislike.
Loved it
Five stars, as this was clearly the best chapter.
If I'm not mistaken, she did admit to fucking other guys and getting pregnant while they were engaged. While it is understandable that he gets back with her after a horrible misunderstanding, the pre wedding shit was never discussed.
Gail has made a huge mistake
He's too emotionally stunted. I guess women do some pretty stupid things but getting back with this idiot shouldn't be one of them. Mommy dearest should have been bitch slapping him each time she met up with him. He'll be out looking for strange inside of a year... because he does want a master/slave relationship with his wife
what an unlikable character
Well-written story, but emotionally unpleasant for me because Rob was such a turd. I would have hoped Gail would have dumped him. You know, he never did admit he was wrong. She told him he was crap in bed, well guess what? He was, he was an uptight, close-minded, judgmental, unloving jerk. He never even had the perspective to admit that he was wrong about all of that and he never apologized to her for making her feel like a pervert for having normal sexual interests.
Everything about the story was great but the lead character was an antagonist rather than a protagonist. Again, what a turd!
I liked it 5*****
Can I get Marge's number, my Wednesday evenings are free.
tom anon
Hogwash!!!
Portrait of a classical stupid wimp.
wow
usually its the wife i hate in these types of stories but hubby was a bitch.
****
I give Gail 3 months till she gets fed up.
Rob is a seriously messed up person.
Gail Sue sucks and so does his mother and his sister for both of them taking her side.
I love it when people who should know better think that what they want for you is best for you. Gail Sue was trying to negotiate right up until Bob had him nut up and take her back. I suspect the real reason that he wouldn't eat GS's pussy was because it was full all the time. Sounds to me like she was an absolute slut and that doesn't change just because she got married. Especially since he "didn't do it" for her.
He was a dick for fucking that married woman, but the way he was probably raised and his experience with Gail Sue taught him that pussy was pussy, even on a cow. Or a married woman who didn't want to give up her gravy train. I guess Bob doesn't know about any straight down the middle women. But damn, the boy can write. I just don't like his penchant for slut loving husbands who forgive anything to get the bitch back so she can humiliate him some more.
Contradicts Earlier Chapter
"I am serious Rob. No man except you has touched me since I put your ring on my finger.”
Huh? She admitted she had sex for 6 months while she was in Atlanta, and she went a week after he gave her a rung!
So the first thing she wants reentering this uncertain relationship is to bring a child into it?
And he's OK with that? Two cartoon characters about whom we couldn't care less. The only person I feel sorry for is the kid who will have these two whacko's for parents!
A CONSCIOUS AND A CARING PARENT
you would think he doesnt have a chance. TK U MLJ LV NV
Very good until the trainwreck at the end
Why would he believe a word coming out of her mouth? She trashes him, leaves in a huff and then decides she wants him back and that she can live with missionary sex forever? Too big a turnaround. Especially from a woman with her history. She lied to him and then went and had a baby. Now he's supposed to accept that she's not been seeing other men, even after she got the divorce papers? That doesn't track. She's a manipulative liar. End of story. The divorce goes forward to its conclusion. And have some harsh words with Mom. No more setups. Baby my ass.
Poor girl....
He's a freakin freakazoid!!! From the beginning his thoughts about sex were just weird! She had every right to leave him since she had tried over and over to get him to try new stuff and THEN he just gives in and does anything any other woman wanted to do to him after she leaves? Evil little hypocritical creep!!! I understand her thoughts about leaving, trying to shake him up. Maybe not the best choice but at least she was trying. And then he never got the dang point! His little ego was so injured that he never once thought that he was ever anything but perfect!! She should have kept running as far away from him as possible!!! Sorry, I'll quit railing now!! lol
No
If you want a reconciliation, write a story where there does appear to be some slight belief that they can reconcile. There is no rationale for reconciliation in your story 1*
Wow, what a douche bag!
He absolutely refuses to pleasure his wife then goes right out and does it with other women. He wasn't a hypocrite, he was an asshole! How any woman could love a jackass like that is unbelievable. The first chapter was the same standard cliche' and the other chapters just proved over and over again what a miserable fuck this guy is.
This was a terrible story!
Oh, good...
So I'm not the only one who thinks Rob is a selfish, uptight, arrogant asshole. Gail Sue was right, as much as fictional characters go. And as far as Rob's character, he's almost a caricature.
Yeah, don't think I'll be browsing through JPB's repertoire again. Most of his characters need years of help from mental health professionals.
what a hypocritical scumbag piece of shit
Any wife treating her husband the way he did her would be out on her ass with a hella nasty BTB. Congratukations on making one of the worst and most undeserving ceating whore men ever.
Wow, the comments on this site on this, and other stories!
That's right, "stories". There just stories dumb asses, "stories", not real life. You need to move to another site, or at least, "shut up"! This one was pretty good, with a take on relationships that I hadn't read before.
why wouldn't she think it?
Gail:
"I thought that you would do whatever you had to do to keep me."
He let her have sex with other men while wearing his engagement ring.
Have another man's child while wearing his engagement ring.
And after that still marry her.
So tell me;
Why wouldn't she have reason to believe he would do anything and everything to keep her?
ugh
This guy is undoubtedly the stupidest SOB that ever lived.
How can you create such a childish little shit as this guy. What is wroong with you?
Terrible, terrible 1*
Cardboard Morons
Absolutely absurd ending given what had gone before. His mother should have been ditched for being the arrogant bitch she was. 1*
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