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Not my usual fare on Literotica
but, I really like science fiction and good fantasy and this does look well written!
Epic
This review is about the entire set of W1
Im not sure I would call this erotica... and there is one place where I really feel that the sex scene was a bit out of place for what was going on.
I would class this as a fantasy adventure (romance) Im going to say romance but its subtle enough that as a guy I don't feel chick flicked.
but that ends any complaints I have about the entire set of W1.
This series is absolutely epic. I freaking loved the hell out of it I want the hard copy book of this complete with illustration. I want to see the movie of this story.
Im serious this series should be published with or with out the detailed sex the story is involving I fond my self dam near crying in parts.
now im trying to work out the next in the set I should be reading
wow.
I actually skipped to the comment section just to say this:
You had me hooked from less than halfway down the first page. That's rare. Like, Hope Diamond rare. I hope the rest is just as good!
seriously complex
u could used less describing of all the characters in the first part. it kinda sucked, i kinda skipped parts, its complex and boring, i see u would like to give an illustrative explaining, but it just makes the story boring, the first 2 pages were hell, and when i feel like i go no else better thing to do, i'll read the 3rd. seriuosly dude, make the story a lil less complicated its hard to follow and remember and i have a never ending thirst fro fantasy stories here, i used to read around 10-12 chapters in one go, but the first 2 pages of ur novel is pretty boring and makeing me lose the intrest to go further, plz take this adive in ur up coming stories
You could use much better grammar when you criticize someone's work.
And, of course, it'd help if you were a registered use. Small thing, but it adds a lot of credibility.
And, quite honestly, if you can't stand to read a few pages of introductory detail, you aren't as avid a reader as you thought.
Ever try reading the Dune series?
The first few CHAPTERS are introductory. Not just details, but stuff that makes absolutely no sense whatsoever unless you actually keep reading it and get past those chapters. THEN the author starts to explain things.
So stop your whining, and appreciate the work that went into this, or just give constructive criticism. What you posted wasn't aggressive, but it was certainly rude.
Interested!
Hopefully next chapter has more things happening :)
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