A Birthday Surprise Ch. 01

Great!!!

That is a fantastic start to a story. Please keep the chapters coming =)

:D

I usually don't like Romance stories as quite a lot of the time they seem like the characters just meet and fall instantly in love but I have to say I am loving the way you are slowly building theeir relationship. The raport between Simon and Emily is funny and sweet. Love your writing!

Good start!!

I am really looking forward to part 2.. I like the slow buildups, more 'real' and easier to enjoy.. Good start to the story, I hope the next parts come easily for you!

Just Great!

Love the storyline, love the character's, most of all loved the fact that no one had braless 36FF's (as if that would actually be attractive) to make up for the lack of intellect! Now I really want to know what's next!

AMAZING!!!!

HAHAHA I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! It had me smiling the whole time!!!! PLEASE continue!!!!

I love it!

It was funny. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks.

great job!

This really is an amazing start to what is going to be a great story. i cant wait to read the rest.

Waiting for the next chapter...

I was entertained!

I keep checking for the next chapter!!!

I really hope that MsJenn gets the next chapter up soon! I really loved the first one and cannot wait for the next part of the story

fantastic

Great start! Really hope you continue this one, can't wait to see what happens next

Love it!

I too hope you continue this story!

This is my second time reading this story and it is one of the best I've read on this site in a while. I really hope you continue this series. Please write more!

Excellent story, couldn't stop giggling.

I mean it's so original, the idea, and everything behind it. The characters make me smile nonstop. I absolutely adore this and pray you continue the stories. Great job & I gave it 5stars.

grt story

this is a great story. i hope u wud continue it. one of the best so far.

go on.

this is an amazing story, &nd i hope you keep writing more.

Simon & Emily

Great story. I hope you continue the story line. Simon & Emily have a great chemistry that makes you smile.

More!

I wish to add to the chorus wanting more of this story. This is a wonderful beginning.

I was giggling like a adoring fan the entire time I was reading this!!

very cute!!

more!

anxiously awaiting more!

More please...?

More

I really love this story, please write more

I like to think this is a story of your day.

Dear Lady,

The irony of such a story being posted in a site such as Lit reminds me the everyone has a story. Even the people behind the pretend names on the right column of the chat room.
Have a safe and profitable week.

Greg
P.S. I would enjoy the opportunity for a conversation some time.