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Then and Now

byAmandaSilver©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/27/10

This has potential.

But it needs more concrete imagery and less discussion of abstracts. Fix that and it'll be good.

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by RossDaniels05/02/10

Very powerful

I liked it.

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