All Comments on 'New Kingdom: American Court Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i love it!

i love it, i want more!!!

RavenNightcloudRavenNightcloudabout 14 years ago
love it so far

this story is great, its well written and the plot is nice, all it needs to be great in my eyes it has.

keep up the good work!

erin1955erin1955almost 14 years ago
Fab

Love ur work.please dont keep us waiting too long

coffinbaitcoffinbaitalmost 14 years ago
Please Let Gabe and Alena be together

Alena and gabe are so in love with each other but they are filled with doubts because of the lives they lead please write more on this wonderful couple

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 14 years ago
Enjoying this story.

I would like to know more about what happened 8 years ago. And they should definitely be together :)

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Longer

I wish the Chapters were longer, I keep having to stop and say I'm enjoying your story. If I don't leave a comment in the next couple of Chapters, it's because I want to keep reading. I'll let you know if I don't like something, but so far so good.

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOabout 12 years ago
YES!

Read the first 3 chapters to see if it would catch my interest and after the first chapter i was hooked 5 stars for all three. Now i'm gonna work my way through the Kingdom series with enjoyment cause there are so many. And i can tell its gonna be a great read. Thankyou!

GerrivGerrivalmost 12 years ago
Hmmmmm

I've just started readIng the story but am already trying to pace my self because I dont want to end but I also crave to see what comEs next. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
nice hook

after chptr 1 i was intrigued; not the usual fare. by thend of chptr2 i was hooked if for no more than curiousity sake of where will this go. kudos. ive only seen one passionate kiss so far and little refernce to overt sexuality/sex. so far id have to say if this continues true , it will be the very definition of literotica. the bang a gone get it on approach does grow tiresome. finaly a story where erotica will play part rather than erotica where a story is merely a thread to tie it together.

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