by MicKay
this story is great, its well written and the plot is nice, all it needs to be great in my eyes it has.
keep up the good work!
Alena and gabe are so in love with each other but they are filled with doubts because of the lives they lead please write more on this wonderful couple
I would like to know more about what happened 8 years ago. And they should definitely be together :)
I wish the Chapters were longer, I keep having to stop and say I'm enjoying your story. If I don't leave a comment in the next couple of Chapters, it's because I want to keep reading. I'll let you know if I don't like something, but so far so good.
Read the first 3 chapters to see if it would catch my interest and after the first chapter i was hooked 5 stars for all three. Now i'm gonna work my way through the Kingdom series with enjoyment cause there are so many. And i can tell its gonna be a great read. Thankyou!
I've just started readIng the story but am already trying to pace my self because I dont want to end but I also crave to see what comEs next. Great story!
after chptr 1 i was intrigued; not the usual fare. by thend of chptr2 i was hooked if for no more than curiousity sake of where will this go. kudos. ive only seen one passionate kiss so far and little refernce to overt sexuality/sex. so far id have to say if this continues true , it will be the very definition of literotica. the bang a gone get it on approach does grow tiresome. finaly a story where erotica will play part rather than erotica where a story is merely a thread to tie it together.