Though would've loved to have read the wanton, whorish words spilling from her lips after he put the wood to her, too. :-D Nevertheless, I get the "leave-it-to-the-imagination" ending. ;-)
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Anonymous04/03/10
FABULOUS!
Your writing is excellent and you draw a scene with such intellectual power... the mind fucking is a strong as the ass-fucking. Scrumptous!
SpanknWill
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Anonymous04/14/10
Good....
Theres a typo at the end of it hehe...just thought I'd point that out in case anyone missed it :P
English
wow...
... just, wow!
Amazing. Soo HOT!!!!!
Awesome build-up!
Though would've loved to have read the wanton, whorish words spilling from her lips after he put the wood to her, too. :-D Nevertheless, I get the "leave-it-to-the-imagination" ending. ;-)
FABULOUS!
Your writing is excellent and you draw a scene with such intellectual power... the mind fucking is a strong as the ass-fucking. Scrumptous!
SpanknWill
Good....
Theres a typo at the end of it hehe...just thought I'd point that out in case anyone missed it :P
Typo!?
What? Where? I must fix it!!!
Thank you all for the wonderful feedback. So glad you are enjoying! :)
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