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21st Century Subterranean Slavery Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by dogbreath196110/10/10

i'm surprised

this story turned me on i can't wait to see the rest.

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by Anonymous08/18/12

What on earth is this?

It should be under non-erotic.

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by Anonymous07/24/13

Wtf?

This is too far. This is horrifying.

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by Anonymous07/15/14

too Far

The story is too horrifying and I think you should put less harm to the slaves.

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by Anonymous07/07/15

Exciting

This first chapter is very exciting and arousing. Well set up and a nice progression into the verbal picture of the story. Looking forward to reading more chapters and understanding the delicious enlargement of the story line.

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