this just works as literature, not to mention erotica. Good job!
Could rock and lilt and sway to your,em,words all day....
I love the way your write. I never tire of your stories!
This is seriously amazing. It's lonely, fast-paced, slow and humorous all at once. I like the rhyme and rhythm in the beginning paragraphs especially.
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Great writing style
this just works as literature, not to mention erotica. Good job!
Ummmm....
Could rock and lilt and sway to your,em,words all day....
lOVE IT!!
I love the way your write. I never tire of your stories!
This is seriously amazing. It's lonely, fast-paced, slow and humorous all at once. I like the rhyme and rhythm in the beginning paragraphs especially.
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