Pleasing Mother Nature

Nice job

Good luck in the contest.

Taking the theme to heart

That's what you did. Simple, straightforward, and with some nice turns along the way. Your description of Pai was particularly nice.

Interesting!

If having sex in the forest would help keep it green, I would like to do my part. Just kidding
Good luck in the contest
DG

the sex part is good!!!

I love the story! I can imagine it being some kind of hentai movie too!

LOL!

Your story is very similar to mine! I enjoyed!

This is very good for the theme

I like the fucking too. 5 stars.

Dream Weaver

The story is simple and direct, the pace is strong and all the better for the sex to really get under your whiskers and turn you on. I enjoyed how you built up the main character's tension, making the sex savage, and reduced him to a "rutting...dog". As another commenter stated, the description of Pai was especially well-done. Great job.

Great work

I thoroughly enjoyed your writing and am really glad I found it through your post in the playground!

Good job

Wow naughty, never make me rea your writing again.
Love Mom.

good start but became too diect in the middle

Nice concept. Became too direct in the middle. Felt u cud have written a bigger one then it would have been much better

very clever and sexy...