A Change of Heart

Very nice!

Sweet story. I would have liked for 'you' to ask him more what he was feeling in the moment; a little more dialogue during the love-making. Maybe that's just my curiosity regarding how it would have felt for a anal virgin getting fucked for the first time.

MMMM

I hope theres more to this story, I'd love to see them in love.

Delectable ;)

Your description of the boy as well as the love making. Well written. Looking forward to more. Thanks.

is there more?

i really hope theres a part 2 to this story...it feels unfinished and i was just getting into the story when it ended!

LOVELY!!!

That was a lovely story. Hopeing thier is more to come!!!

wow...

What a breathtakingly beautiful story of finding love so randomly... this was just fantastic!!! LOVED it! :)

can't wait for more...

love the stiry and hope to read the next chapter soon...

It's alright

I don't know. I liked the story and the sex was great, but I think the ending was totally unrealistic. It would have been better if had gone to the shoot. Then later, over time, come to be with the main character. It was all too rapid at the end.

Oh, nice! I like it! I wish "sr71plt" would take a leaf out of your book.