I somehow feel a buildup to a Kate happening, I hope. Keep up the good work.
keep them cummin
One of the hottest stories ever!!!!!
I loved the story but it was marred in places by poor grammar and spelling. With some polish, this could be an exceptional piece of writing.
grammar and spelling were fine great story
I didn't realize this was a creative writing class project. I thought that there story were really exciting. Looking forward for the rest of the series.
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Kate Next?
I somehow feel a buildup to a Kate happening, I hope. Keep up the good work.
ch. 4?
keep them cummin
hot!!!!!
One of the hottest stories ever!!!!!
Great story badly edited
I loved the story but it was marred in places by poor grammar and spelling. With some polish, this could be an exceptional piece of writing.
perfection is over rated
grammar and spelling were fine
great story
I didn't realize this was a creative writing class project. I thought that there story were really exciting. Looking forward for the rest of the series.
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