All Comments on 'The Tank'

It is never a good idea to place the reader as the subject of the story, especially in a random environment may be of a different gender than that which is intended.

That aside, great story.

that was a really bad story, really bad. i agree with the other comment about not making your reader the subject of the story.

Enjoyed the story. Would love to se more along this theme. Submissive woman being made to go from prim-and-proper to wet and Slutty by falling, dropped, or tossed into water. Maybe even something with n element of stripping. (Like an alult club introducing a new game of "Sink the Slut" where being dunked required the removal of one article of clothing.