A fun little story. I'm not sure I could hook up with someone who just screwed a guy to get information from him, seems like he is a little too close to the action for comfort, but I can go with the story flow on that.
I liked it! Furthermore, to those who always say if you don't like the story then don't read it, this is a prime example of a story you have to finish before you can judge. I can guarantee that I did not like the way it was going and would have been disappointed if I had given up and written a bad review.
Does an undercover 'faux' wife count? It certainly is written to maintain the impression that he is trying to maintain the virtue of HIS Sweetie! Turns out he is just providing security backup. It also sounds like they had a plan from which she improvised without telling him, although it DID complete their part of the mission. It was a good 'double cross' on the 'black hat' as well as another one on the reader!
Can you honestly think someone would agree to his girlfriend / fiancee fucking around to get proof? Makes her a whore. He is - as many of your "heroes" nothing but spineless.
She die a job just like the Mr Wonderful male spies we all want to be lol -
So it was a female using sex for god and country this time - get over it - you play in that game you better have a more open attitude about it you may end up dead.
So she has her integrity and once she is out of the game she is out - no harder to accept than it is that he will stop once he is out of the same damn game - get a grip folks - YOUR DOUBLE STANDARD IS SHOWING -
But I'm not sure I'd be marrying Molly. She sounds a bit touchy and a wrong move could cost him his privates. Best to marry a nice girl that's not in the service. Gather your H pay, stash enough to retire, THEN get hitched and settle down to raise a brood in a nice house/farm/vineyard along the South Coast. Cheers.
I thought that he was a cuckold husband for most of the story. She was just cheeky enough to really piss off a real husband, but since she had disappeared on her backup I would have kicked her arrogant ass. Don't know whether the marriage will work out for them but they should certainly understand each other's background as well as what they will tolerate from one another. Also not so sure that I would play second fiddle to 5 times in the sack that day. Pussy is like a plate, can be cleaned and used by another diner, but I would have had to wait a day. Cheeky bitch might have left a little food on the plate as a "joke".
and to hell with personal morality, integrity, honesty, and basic human decency. Of course in this genre it appears that to defeat evil one must become it, which is a sad commentary on relationships.
Any nation or organization that requires this kind of relativistic thinking and behavior is not worth saving and any person of conscience who crosses that line for such a miserable standard should not be trusted.
The sad truth is that Molly is a whore, regardless of the cause.
English
Another knock-out!
Interesting, humorous, and a great read. It is ALWAYS good to see one of your stories posted. Please keep them coming.
Hamster???
Hamster!
A nice little tale.
This writer, whatever name he uses, is a really good story teller. I always enjoy his efforts.
Cute
A fun little story. I'm not sure I could hook up with someone who just screwed a guy to get information from him, seems like he is a little too close to the action for comfort, but I can go with the story flow on that.
Yup, cute is right for this story
Very cute and lots of fun to read.
Good Story
Smooth read except when his "wife" states that she had to shag the five times! Initially it read like a normal loving wife tale... Nice idea!
Fun read and I've heard....
....that name, (or close)-was it Lord Hamster?
nice
Really nice
Enjoyable read...left a broad smile on my face at the end
Well done....took me a long time to figure out the real story. That AHA moment was pure joy. Thank you!
Unbelievable !!
How difficult it would be to purge the gutter out of this Pom??
Typical Brit gutless and mindless attitude at writing. This story is one of many I just skipped thru. If I read it all I would just throw-up !
Odd
3***s
A twisted tale...
and I liked it.
You Just Have to Read Them
I liked it! Furthermore, to those who always say if you don't like the story then don't read it, this is a prime example of a story you have to finish before you can judge. I can guarantee that I did not like the way it was going and would have been disappointed if I had given up and written a bad review.
Thanks again and keep writing!
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Me too !! :)
Well done
Good story and interesting twist
I like it ... despite ...
Does an undercover 'faux' wife count? It certainly is written to maintain the impression that he is trying to maintain the virtue of HIS Sweetie! Turns out he is just providing security backup. It also sounds like they had a plan from which she improvised without telling him, although it DID complete their part of the mission. It was a good 'double cross' on the 'black hat' as well as another one on the reader!
Enjoyed it
Thanks for the offering.
Stupid!
Can you honestly think someone would agree to his girlfriend / fiancee fucking around to get proof? Makes her a whore. He is - as many of your "heroes" nothing but spineless.
Excellent twist -
It went very well all the way through -
She die a job just like the Mr Wonderful male spies we all want to be lol -
So it was a female using sex for god and country this time - get over it - you play in that game you better have a more open attitude about it you may end up dead.
So she has her integrity and once she is out of the game she is out - no harder to accept than it is that he will stop once he is out of the same damn game - get a grip folks - YOUR DOUBLE STANDARD IS SHOWING -
GOOD GOLLY AGENT MOLLY
in one door and out the other, TK U MLJ LV NV
Well that was funny.
But I'm not sure I'd be marrying Molly. She sounds a bit touchy and a wrong move could cost him his privates. Best to marry a nice girl that's not in the service. Gather your H pay, stash enough to retire, THEN get hitched and settle down to raise a brood in a nice house/farm/vineyard along the South Coast. Cheers.
Good job of misdirection.
I thought that he was a cuckold husband for most of the story. She was just cheeky enough to really piss off a real husband, but since she had disappeared on her backup I would have kicked her arrogant ass. Don't know whether the marriage will work out for them but they should certainly understand each other's background as well as what they will tolerate from one another. Also not so sure that I would play second fiddle to 5 times in the sack that day. Pussy is like a plate, can be cleaned and used by another diner, but I would have had to wait a day. Cheeky bitch might have left a little food on the plate as a "joke".
Nice little tale, thanks for sharing.
For Queen and Country....
and to hell with personal morality, integrity, honesty, and basic human decency. Of course in this genre it appears that to defeat evil one must become it, which is a sad commentary on relationships.
Any nation or organization that requires this kind of relativistic thinking and behavior is not worth saving and any person of conscience who crosses that line for such a miserable standard should not be trusted.
The sad truth is that Molly is a whore, regardless of the cause.
Writing was OK, though.
“If I had to choose...
"between betraying my country and betraying my friend, I hope I should have the guts to betray my country.” E.M. Forster
MOLLY AND ME
and who makes three or four. TK U MLJ LV NV
Fun Read****
Thanks for sharing.
Liked it but didn't love it.
The transition from remorseless whore to loving would be much longer and more complicated.
Worth a 4 though for good writing.
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