All Comments on 'A Teachers Story Ch. 01'

by bmunchausen

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photographerphotographeralmost 14 years ago
At last - a damn fine story

Immensely enjoyable, well written and keeps the reader's attention. Well done.

While not "erotica" I'd like to read more about how the "Water Rats" get on.

Excellent work. Keep it up and give us more .... SOON!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Outstanding

Great story. Well written. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
excellent

The whole story is great and I can't wait to see how you develop it more. Great start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE

Finished with the next part yet? Can't wait!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Oi! Hurry up with the next installment - it's really good!

Dancewithme2Dancewithme2about 13 years ago
Magnifique

C'est tres magnifique!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Two thoughts

You are most articulate and an excellent writer -- the story is very exciting where it should be exciting, etc. Two quibbles: 1) why an aversion to "cock"? I get tired of reading only of your dick -- several times in the same paragraph. It's okay, but tiresome. Cock can be overused, of course, but it is a great erotic, descriptive word. 2) It is "sloe gin" not "slow: (has nothing to do with speed).

Be that as it may, I will read the rest of the story with great interest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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throes

CatHeathCatHeathabout 7 years ago
Sweet

A great read. Lovely and sweet. Looking forward to the next instalment. xx

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