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All Comments on 'Clare and Present Danger Ch. 02'

by YogaVixen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I hope you don't take another year to update :)

I like the way this going - but please, Clare still needs to have a backbone. a few ruffled feathers on either side would be good :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

this is really good. i like reading it from the 2nd Person POV

you should definitely keep going very soon, i'm interested.

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