Pumping Heat

Very good

This story was actually not extremely erotic. But it had extremely good character and feeling, therefore is one of my faves. Good job and good luck in the competition!

Very Nice!

I liked it. The characters seemed real. It was more like this story was written from memory with a few name changes. I think it's something all parents go through mentally. Well done Author.
DG

Lovely story!

A great, well written story that held my interest. I liked your characters and agree with the previous poster that they seemed very real. Daughters will always hold a place in their father's heart!

Good luck in the contest.

I thought I'd put a comment in previously but I guess I did something wrong. I loved the humanity of this story, it has so much warmth and goodness. I also loved the way it tied in with the competition theme, it reads as being very honest. I can only say thank you and wish you well in the competition, but somehow, win or lose, I think you are already living your rewards and the practicality of your story is am exemplar to us all. Thank you.

Great story. It could have done with a little more dialogue I think.

Loved the "Father's Side"

So much about this story touched my heart. I couldnt' imagine what my own father would have done had he caught me in bed with a boy having sex... and I love how the relationship evolved over time. I like how you set it up to where we knew by the end you liked him & were proud of him. It's not often you hear the story from the POV of a parent... fiction or fact... it was a great story.

"I thought she was a good girl"

"Virginity"- A strange concept kept alive to give parents the opportunity to become raging hypocrites instead of teaching their children personal responsibility.

Sweet story.

A happy ending for everyone. Very nice.

twisted logic

Yes, Dewey and Rockefeller have done a great job of fucking up Americas 'education' system, and screwing with the American public 'mind'.