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Homecoming Meal

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/03/10

Great series.

I loved reading this story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. I only wish the chapters were a little longer.

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by StarlessNight04/03/10

Great story!

Wow, this was really hot. Naughty too! The rest of your stories are also excellent!

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by kayandsteve6904/14/10

Very Hot!

We loved this story. Sex between women in public places is a huge turn on for us (especially Kay). Kay and Steve

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by Anonymous06/18/10

eh?

it was just okay. are you a guy? because it certainly seems like it is coming from the perspective of a man. one thin that bugged me was that you went from "we went to ...." to "she was unbottoning..." next time try to keep the tenses the same. But it did manage to make me wet so not a complete failure ;)

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