Lost and Found Ch. 03

You like to tease

This just keeps getting tantalisingly better! Very, very nice.

Masterpiece

"Lost and Found" is progressing at a believeable pace. It is time to step up Kasey's and Bruce's relationship.

I am hoping this is going to be a very long series, Cant wait to get home again to read the next chapter

Shitttt!!!!

THIS IS TAKING TOOO LOOOONNNNG!!!!!!!!!!!
(don't mind me pal, go right ahead...do yr stuff)

Just keeps getting better

This story just keeps getting better with each new chapter, I really love how their relationship is growing at a normal pace as it would in real life. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.

good work mate, now a days its hard to find a story like yours. all of them goes directly into action scene right away. actually its good to read a story which has some story in it.
keep up the good work,,looking forward to read more of ur story submissions.

wow

Gotta say, I normally do not like things drawn out, but this....this I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Daddy when are we getting more?

Sorry had to say it. I love the story and Kasey is so cute. I hope we get another chapter soon.

Love the build up in this story

I hope you will also continue "An Uncomfortable Situation" as I really enjoyed that story but Lost and Found is growing on me I am enjoying Kasey, going after Bruce knowing it is her lost dad..

Look forward to reading additional chapters of both of your stories
Thanks for the great and enjoyable writing.

Sammie

first review

the story gets better and better i like the pace that your going and please update soon

Great work

You're one of my favorite authors. I really hope you continue this series and a few of the other ones you've written. You have a lot of talent. Thank you for writing, it's greatly appreciated.

Don't! Stop! Don't Stop!!!

Please, Please continue! I just so want read more about them!

Keep going!

Your series are great and you could write more on most of them. I am still dying for you to get to the consummation of this one!

please keep writing

I have read this story and I am intrigued as to where it will end. Please keep writing. In the story you make the characters seem real and alive. Can't wait to read more

It's in your hands .... This author is a rare breed.

Should they or shouldn't they?

You have the beginnings of a sensual movie screenplay with a potential for several different reslts. From my reading of your material, it will be the right one in either direction - you have superior taste. Who else could write this much about a possible incest situation, with sex included, while keeping them pure to each other.

I support your writing efforts and ENCOURAGE everyone to get to know you, and the real lifelike situations you graphically present with normal, everyday people ... without any use of sleeze or sensationalizm. On this site, its a pleasure to find your talent.

This author is a rare breed.

Are you teasing us?

Readers in April asked for more on this series and I'm ready for more, too. Now it's August. Please get over your writer's block and give us more. This is a good story and has lots of room for growth.

six months later...

...we are still waiting for the end of this really amazing story...Next???

Really Good

BUT, based on track record, it appears as if we will not get any more

dont stop now

I really love your stories, but the way you just stopped this one is such a dissapointment! I don't know if I want to invest more time into another of your stories to be left hanging again!

Please continue with the story

I have read this story at least 5 times and will read it again as In My opinion it is one of the best I have read. BUT....I would like you to finish this story, there is so much that you can add. I would say you can do at least 6 more chapters to this story and still have more to write about. I could tell you what could be written to finish this story but you know more about writting than I do. SO, PLEASE finish writing this story and will be checking back to finish reading it when you have finished it.

Great Story Keep Going

The story is great i love the build it....it makes the story that much better. Keep it coming i havent come across a storie this good in awhile. Will be looking forward to the rest please keep going.

Art L.

When are you going to finish your story. There is so many things that I can think of to go on with at least 6 or7 more chapters. I even think of the continuing on the storie myself, but it's not the same as you are very good at writing. Please finish the story ! ! !.

don't stop now!

I like this story. Keep workin' it!

daughter?

So when do you tell us she is his daughter?

David

Please finish the story. It's one of the best !.

Tragic

So unfortunate for this fascinating concept to be left unfinished. Ah well. C'est la vie.

wtf

I was seriously impressed until I got to the end of this story and seen that this amazing series went unfinished! Ruined my night

don't disappoint your public

Your series are all good BUT they need to keep going. Otherwise you will get a rep as a tease. Bookmarked and will come back to look for further work.

Don't dissapoint the public !

Just dissapear from this site, you worthless shit. "1" !

A Touch of Actual Sentiment

I like your work and although I was startled by how you left this piece, it felt tender and sensual. Have you thought more about their paths?

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Typical of this author. He writes very good stories and then pisses off his fans by not finishing them. This ain't the first time.

Encouraging you to complete your work

I'm with the others who say your writing is excellent, yet leaves them feeling incomplete. Have courage and take your stories further to satisfying conclusions.

Continue Please

Please continue with this story. I am enjoying it and want to see how this new love progresses

please continue this story, i really like it and would love to read more

Please Continue!!!

This story is really, Really good. I hope u will continue on with the next chapter. I was disappointed when i realized there wasn't anymore to it yet. Please keep going!

Please?

Please finish this? I think this is one of the top stories on Lit. C'mon, dude. You have it in you. Please??????????????

This Story is Gripping!

I want to read on and on. Hurry with more!

A real shame you never continued with this beautiful story, words; I'll have to read more of your work to see if it is all as good. Keep writing, please.

OK here it is...

It's been three years. Get this show on the road and finish this. You have a good thing going on.

Well....Dear Readers: It's been three full years now since this stanza/chapter three was posted!!! I'll guarantee there will no, as in N O, further renderings nor writings about this beautiful, sensual, respectful and endearing couple--whether blood-related father and daughter or not.

In all fairness this story is a pure, true romance, and so realistic as a romantic and real old fashioned love story, as if a 1940's, 1950's and even early 1960's, love affair! The kind of affair where a guy didn't kiss his gall until the second or third date, didn't sleep with her until after marriage (or at a minimum until after formally engaged), and a time when "making love" meant wooing, dating, necking, kissing, Sunday School-style petting, a dinner or a movie or holding hands and a sensual brotherly/sisterly kind of kiss goodnight on the front stoop!! Not many of those writers come along any more.

The great news is we've read three (very short) chapters of a teasingly daughter and a timidly father potential incestual affair over the past several weeks--and there has been no, as in N O, heavy petting or groping sexual inneundeos!

The bad new is two-fold since the story will never be finished beyond the current stage!! And the second, more horroring aspect is we readers will never know if Kasey (Kimmey??) is actually Bruce's long-lost daughter; which leads to the failure of the readers to be rewarded and entertained with an actual coupling and consummation and maybe even the impregnating of Kasey (Kimmey??) by Bruce as, at least, lovers and more specific as carnal incestual father and daughter lovers!!!!!

...a shame that there isn't more story!

...i should know better by now than to read a multi chapter story without checking the date and then skipping to the comments at the end to see if the story was finished! Its always heart-breaking when the reader is left hanging :( while I appreciate what I have read sometimes I wish I could take it back so that I didnt leave the room unfulfilled!

The only big plus, for a change, is that Bigdaddyg actually had something different to comment for a change, lol! Usually its the same old loooong comments! (Fun poke!;)

Wondering...

How come this story was never finished?

How could you

just stop before the story was over. In the beginning you promised a really good ending and this really sucks.

Very good story

please please please write more of this story it is beautifull