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All Comments on 'A Penzance Quickie'

by morgan_69

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don87654don87654about 14 years ago
Condom

Mention of condum ruined this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Erotic or Short Stories??

Not a bad start but rushed right through it making it even shorter than a short story. Keep working on it but put some effort into it and make it a story.

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