Good story, but it was over before I knew what was happening. I would have liked to see more detail leading up to the main event.
It was nice and quick but too the point. I loved this one. You write very well.
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Good story, but it was over before I knew what was happening. I would have liked to see more detail leading up to the main event.
It was nice
It was nice and quick but too the point. I loved this one. You write very well.
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