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Can't Wait
to hear Aunt Kathy explain doing Aunt Diane. And do Beth & Jim move out
and get their own Place?
great story
up to your usual standards really good and the little twist in the last chapter.
didnt see that one coming well done really enjoy your writing
stupendous
A superb series to be sure. Only criticism I have is a few sex scenes could have used more detail and narrative, like when Diane and our hero finally got together towards the end.
Cheers!
One of the Best
I have to say that this set of stories is one of the very best that I have read in a very long time, keep up the good work
Ummmm......wow
That was amazing, easily one of the best series I have read here, probly the best. Great twist, great build up, great everything. Inspiring
great series
Thanks for a great little series. I hope stuff is as good as your eventually. Well done.
Continue
Could use another chapter or five maybe boy nocks up kath and beth.Think about it.
It's a good story, just not my kind of story.
I'll comment that it was a good story and I did read all chapters...just that I kinda lose my favor in stories where dad/daughter is present in anyway...don't know why, but I just have a natural existing disdain for that specific genre. I won't give a bad rep for the story though, so good job on the story.
agreed
I'll have to agree with DeJeane. I also have a thing against Fathers fucking Daughters. It somehow feels like rape, in the back of my mind. Besides, Jim and Beth have just discovered each other and were exploring each other, where whatever they have is going, how long it is going to last, what their future together holds. It seems somehow wrong to introduce another male into their relationship. Seems like they should just have each other for awhile, and Kathy, Diane, Carol, and Jeff have always got each other. You use 'though', 'needless to say', and 'admittedly' a whold lot. And sometimes I can't tell when someone is talking because yuou mess up those quotation mark thingys.
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