I really liked this story. Looking forward the the follow up!
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Anonymous10/16/11
DELETE OR FINISH
time get writing or erasing it is never acceptable to leave the readers hanging. good or not always finish what you start. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND FINISH WHAT YOU START DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.
English
Hot Story
It felt a little rushed, but still good. Maybe next time you can draw it out a little.
Very Good.
Loved it. Can't wait to read the next part.
Sisters are made to fuck
Loved the story so far.
WOW
I liked it big time!
You have to write more, and I want to know what colleage she chooses....
will they keep on seeing each other
More please :-)
I really liked this story. Looking forward the the follow up!
DELETE OR FINISH
time get writing or erasing it is never acceptable to leave the readers hanging. good or not always finish what you start. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND FINISH WHAT YOU START DO IT RIGHT OR NOT AT ALL.
nice
More please
Not ended story
Nice story, but not ended. We are waiting the next chapter from 6 years ago!
Is for that I give you only 4*.
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