All Comments on 'My First Threesome'

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lipkisslipkissabout 14 years ago
Great story

I hope you finish the story soon. I love true stories

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleabout 14 years ago
Very well done introduction...

...the rest of the story had better be good to live up to this! I'm already imagining myself eating Heather in a 69 as Chris is fucking her.

JedikoolJedikoolalmost 14 years ago
fantastic

Great, great story. Very realistic. I pictured them as real people. During your sex scenes, you change from past to present tense. I don't know if that's deliberate or not. At first it bothered me, but then I got used to it. Anyways, very, very hot. I love the little things like the phone picture.

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