by eagle122999
...the rest of the story had better be good to live up to this! I'm already imagining myself eating Heather in a 69 as Chris is fucking her.
Great, great story. Very realistic. I pictured them as real people. During your sex scenes, you change from past to present tense. I don't know if that's deliberate or not. At first it bothered me, but then I got used to it. Anyways, very, very hot. I love the little things like the phone picture.