All Comments on 'You Don't Know Me'

Good start, this reads like a warm up to the poem where you tell us who you are.... to let us know You... you tell us we do not know you but then lose the opportunity to introduce your true self. But like I said, good start, really, it is essential that you write this kind of statement in order to get the courage to paint a self portrait with the details that are so unique that they could be used to identify what you consider "you."

Cheerio-

Anna