All Comments on 'Randi's List'

Stick with what you do best. This was not the quality or theme of your usual work.

good story JPB not a fan of cream pies but like your stories so I read it any way. Thanks for the entertainment. Mike from Texas

Presumably, he really would have enjoyed slurping all that spunk...

So Randi can play, but Slick has to keep it in his pants. If it was I, Randi would be history.

....owe you one....

JPB, you are a gifted and very hard-working writer. You did not achieve your ability without one Hell of a lot of work and then listening to others, writers not just those who comment on this site. on the strengths and weakness's of your writing. You have learned and improved. In this story, you seemed to forget all that you have learned in order to 'get it done.' I hope that you will pull this story and write another one, or perhaps just rewrite this one, that shows your real abilities.

Entertaining and fast to read with a lot of erotic sex.

Thanks for the good read

When Jeff is telling Slick about the Harry Pissed Me Off club, there are a couple of references to 'Brandi' instead of 'Randi'.

in plain english. I love it.

just nasty bob that is all you can say about this one. now i want to read the installment on your newer one. you do a great slut bob. a skanky slut and you do the best of anyone on the site. 5

but she will cut his balls if he cheats, only bob can come up with this shit, so perverted that it worth a 5

She can play - more than play given the weekly gang bangs. And he can't? And if she likes variety so much, why is she living with him? And why is he LETTING her live with him? One way or the other he's dying. Either she fucks him to death, she passes along something from her gang bangs he can't get rid of or he takes up with Lucy and loses his balls. Doesn't seem like an ideal situation. But when JPB writes it, it must be true!

Throw Randi out and go get Lucy. At least that way you can't set aside the disgusting cremepies that are threatening your health and the disgusting woman that's forcing them on you. What a bitch. No woman is worth that crap.

This is a strong and strange fetish you have Bob. I swear at least half your stories involve creampies and dick sucking by proxy.

At least in this one, you didn't bother to torture the story to make a creampie inevitable like so many others and you were kind enough to warn us.

I read this hoping for something to redeem the story but no...nothing Just a man slurping up other men's spunk without a qualm.

Since I don't share your...fancy, this was a loss for me as a story.

He needs to get rid of Randi before she gets pregnant - by him or another man. Or before she catches something nasty he can't get rid of with a shot. When you look up the definition of "slut" in the dictionary, there's a picture of Randi! She's a manipulative, self centered bitch. It's all her way or the highway. Why would he want to stay with a woman like that? This was one of your stories that there wasn't a decent or likeable character to be found. Just plain nasty stuff Bob!

Thanx for the heads up at the beginning very much appreciated .

She wants him to be only unto her? They're not married. Kick her ass out if she gets that way.

Yuk...

..or so I would think. Randi's screwing around on "Slick", so why shouldn't he do the same once in awhile? What's with him eatting her out after a gangbang? Ever hear of STD's, Aids, HIV? Etc........

Strange tale. Not my normal topic so I'll just leave it at that.

no rating

That makes no sense. They aren't married. She's fucking other men. They aren't talking about marriage (why would he?). And on that note, why would he eat her out with other men's cum in her? Can you say disease? That made no sense and was just nasty. Not a good ending.

Typical JPB, creampies, gangbangs and sharing.....I think he writes from first-hand experience.

Ya gotta love an organized slut. 5*

So bad that I won't even bother to comment.

...comes up with another weird and crazy tale.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for originality.

Paul in Oklahoma

***That was a total of twelve times that I had cum in her in twenty-eight hours!***

Sure you did. With that 18 inch dick. LOL.

Nice fantasy.

Load of crap.

So, I guess the question is this, is this a tribute story to Randi, you know, the Randi?

Sorry but no. While technically correct the subject was not for me. And I was warned. So.