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by vrosej1004/04/10

Loved it.

Someday I will learn to fly without a plane and write poetry underwater.

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by annaswirls04/05/10

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Nice bucket list, Sean. I wanted a kick at the end, something clever instead of the list ending in a fairy tale cliche. I know you can do better, I have read your work enough to know you can take a list and tie it up into a bundle solid enough to whack someone in the side of the head. A list gives papercuts. I want to be whacked in the side of the head.

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