You jump to her pregnancy without mentioning if she is pregnant from her father or her husband. So whose the baby's father anyway?
Hot, but was a bit jarring with the abrupt change of pace from the first Chapter. It was still good, though.
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Bad continuity
You jump to her pregnancy without mentioning if she is pregnant from her father or her husband. So whose the baby's father anyway?
Hot, but was a bit jarring with the abrupt change of pace from the first Chapter. It was still good, though.
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Back to Deniz and Amelia Ch. 02 or
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