All Comments on 'Varying Extremes Ch. 03'

So curious about this one!

None of the chapters seem to go together or if this is like a suspense type story where you want to wait until the climax to reveal what Tina's doing to the boys than the story needs to be clearer. Also, this chapter was confusing. Especially the part where Sean goes to Paul's place. Even though it's very confusing I'm still intrigued :)

This could have been such a great story. It's to bad that nothing ties together at allin the 3 posted chapters! The first chapter cliff hanger, was never explained or who the large dude was at the door or why he was even there!!! Second chapter does not even address the visitor. Tina Murray has some strange power over all these supposed straight guys. Maybe she is blackmailing them, guess we will never know any of it. I'm sorry I wasted my time reading 3 chapters. Very frustrating read, even tho the sex scenes were all very hot!!! Once again another story on Lit left hanging and unfinished. Shame on you KyleRockafella