All Comments on 'Seduced by a Stepdaughter Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please write more!

Don't let negative comments get you down. This is a great story. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

TawndieWahengleTawndieWahengleabout 14 years ago
Loved it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hott

Wish u were my daddy......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

When the work and school week started again, Rick was busy with clients and had to work late several nights of the week. In truth, he was avoiding Michelle again. Not because he didn't want her, but because he did. More than he wanted his next breath. It was the intensity of his desire and feelings for her that scared the hell out of him.

@@@ lol, not like hes exactly been holding out, lol! @@@

As the week wore on, Rick felt that he would not be able to stay away from her for much longer. He had heard her crying in her bedroom last night when he returned from a late business dinner. He had not gone in, afraid of where it might lead. Even though it broke his heart to hear the pain in her voice as she cried, he did not go to her. It was for the best.

@@@ What, being a total fucktard douche is for the best? Shoulda never fucked her in the first place if thats the way you want to be. Now you're just being a cruel asshole. @@@

"Did you have fun, honey?" Rick asked her in a sarcastic tone. "Did Tyler show you a good time?"

@@@ Totally out of character. Ten seconds ago he was happy she was ignoring him and relieved she was going out with kids her own age. Not very well written:/ @@@

"Fuck, you're tight. I can barely hold my come in as soon as I enter you," he told her. "Rock your hips now, baby. Ride me."

@@@ better leave the fucking to us grownup guys who can handle tight pussy ;) @@@

He was making a bad habit of that. They'd have to talk about that when he could think again.

@@@ lame! Lets just shoot daddy and we all can take turns taking his place and give her what she needs all the time without the constant psychotic breaks ;) @@@

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
@mike2501

I actually agree with a lot of what you say but:

##"Did you have fun, honey?" Rick asked her in a sarcastic tone. "Did Tyler show you a good time?"

@@@ Totally out of character. Ten seconds ago he was happy she was ignoring him and relieved she was going out with kids her own age. Not very well written:/ @@@##

People have a bad tendency to try and convince themselves of something by ignoring how they feel.. It drives me bonkers when it happens but people have layers of lies and mantras they use all the time. It's not bad writing, just more douche leaking out. :-D

horny2doithorny2doitabout 7 years ago

A great chapter and it keeps the theme going -- love, sex, and more.

cannot wait for another chapter. She is 18 yrs old and now wants to do what she couldn't earlier -- it's natural for many teens to be that way. At least she wasn't on the streets screwing every guy. Thanks.

clitlicker4uclitlicker4uabout 7 years ago
Hot

He is just doing what a good daddy should do, filling her slutty lil teenage cunt full of cum.

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