All Comments on 'Karen's Revelations Ch. 04'

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Robert_NotRobert_Notabout 14 years ago
Wonderful!

Really loved it and am very much looking forward to number 5.

Sometimes you bring a bit too much detail into her story for it to be realistic but it does help extend the juicy bits. I expect when her friends get a bit closer then you'll be able to let the story fade a bit into the background.

Mmmmm!

Like your overall down to earth style.

R.

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