by Occult_philosopher
Love the story so far. I have been waiting in anticipation. I want to know how the "milk" is going to work the ladies over.
This is great start with promise of much to cum!
The gripe of 'formulaic' is irrelevant if not ignorant, as these stories will certainly have some similar roots. But you have lain a great groundwork for a very arousing series. Bring it on!
Keeping making more, I love it so far! It's well written and well paced.
Despite the range of this submission, I find myself wondering how a "nobody" like the main character would be able to accomplish such an erotic feat, especially considering the amount of range that this story gives him. Also, would Maya visit in-between encounters, to encourage him on and assist him in any number of salacious ways?
Love this, can't wait to read the next chapter if your willing to write it!
That was an amazing first chapter...! It was lusting, erotic and taboo laden, though it was also well written, deep and well thought out... Enjoyable for more than just Sexual. It makes you dig your own mind for your own dirt to imagine...