Sammi

More people to dislike

Which the world is full of, yet this has a ring of truth. I ran into one about like that some 30 years back, there seemed to always be scraps around when she showed up.. After she managed to get her boyfriend and me into a brawl that we both lost...my girlfriend at the time walked over and knocked the gal off her barstool. Then she sat on her and explained some things. That worked. Thanks, believeable story and a 5 from this old man.

MGM

Not my favorite of yours!

I've read more than a few Just Plain Bob stories, and I usually enjoy them. This one turned me off in the first few paragraphs.

Interesting tale

of real, but not very likeable people. That the hero would let the slut run his life this way is kind of sad, but she is supposed to be sexual dynamite!

Not much there.

There really is not much to this story...a play on the same old template. As in most of your stories, the characters are all dull, ignorant, worthless people. They would deserve whatever they got, but you never really tell the reader what that is.

Unprincipled

A nice easy read for lovers of Literotica -- but really, are you not sophisticated enough to know the difference between a principal and a principle?

I thought the first part was ....

.....great. JpB. version 546-B@ fills the bizarre dance hall in Bob's mind with more flawed characters bent on self -immolation, but it fizzles a bit at the end with it's "Too good to be true" quickie wrap-up. Still, every once in awhile it's a nice decadent pleasure to indulge in some self-delusion. Could this be a gift from a secretly benevolent transcendentalist????Yeah,,,,,,Right......

And the rest of you expected exactly what from JPB? He is eternally consistent at these type of stories, so why is anyone surprised?

As always, JPB - keep it coming so we have something to evaluate.

Anal is perverted so I only read the first paragraph and gave the perverted story the 1* it deserves.

Anal

Nothing better then fucking a hot woman's ass but still this chick was one demented cookie and got off way to easily

Wham Bam . I got a new Mam !

Just another grade A noir ' the point is that there is no point ' story. Loved it !

The whole situation is ridiculous, the characters overall quite stupid (the characters, that is, not your rendition of them), it's over the top, put a smile on my face and gained you five stars.
And don't worry about the few minor typos, they don't get in the way.

IF YOUR GONNA FIGHT DO IT

if not change your parameters, TK U MLJ LV NV

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Had to give it 4 stars, it wasn't that bad or that great, but DWornout gave it a 1

Not a very good story

Some really unlikeable characters. I think he's brought home a giant problem that sooner or later is going to blowup in his face. That problems name is Sammi. Life can't be about sex all the time (Even in a fictional story). So this is going to be a trainwreck sooner rather than later.

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