All Comments on 'Christina's Shower'

by NJcollegeguy89

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WANNABENUDEWANNABENUDEabout 14 years ago
GREAT START

I can't wait to see where you take this poor little girl. Lots of possibilities and I hope you explore them all!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Part 1

Yes, this needs a title change. So what is there? A new protagonist, or an old one, guarding the door? A video camera? Poor Christina, up a hallway without a towel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
blackmail?

Maybe some of the guys take photos and use it to blackmail her into sex. That would be pretty hot. Hope you continue.

NJcollegeguy89NJcollegeguy89about 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for all your feedback! I will certainly continue with chapter two as soon as possible!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Super good story

GREAT story! =)

Maybe include more blackmail and how Christina secretly gets off on being humiliated, so that she purposely puts herself in the position to continue getting blackmailed.

james243james243over 13 years ago
and then?

What happens next??? Is there a "to be continued"?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more ?

christina, needs some more adventures

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
What happens

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
two years, we're still waiting.

I'm going to put this story in my favorites on the condition that we get a conclusion.

ant4699ant4699about 8 years ago
More

Need more! this is a great story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WTF

WTF! This must have been written by a child. If you're not going to finish what you start, don't start. For fellow readers that review comment before reading the story, don't waste your time reading this crap!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Wish i knew what happened next

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