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This is fast becoming one of my favorites...
Your writing style has me hooked! Please continue this story... I find myself eagerly waiting each new installment!
more
I love your writing and can't wait for more of this story thank u for shareing mechmanas
Moving Smoothly
I do not know which is more important, that the hero's interest in the fair sex has returned, or that Oddtus seems to be the avatar of the God who created the Goblins.
terrible
I reallt tried to like this story but i can't because it reads like a bad sci-fi novel where you care more about the history of your world then actually telling a story. From just reading 5 chapters the only thing i got so far is rowan wants to open his own forge which you harped about on for 3 chapters before you got to any real plot. Why is this story so slow moving and repetitive? Also you gave applewood one name yet you use the original name and switch off randomly, why? If you gave the town a nickname why keep using both names? It gets confusing trying to read a story with just random fghhekddsjkh pop out. Yeah i understand you want to make this world more fantasy based but constantly using elvish? words is annoying especially if you give a fairly simple name to it right after. All in all good writing but bad storytelling.
@Anon, why why why?
Because Stultus is a trollolololol!
I can't say I pity you for not being able to tolerate this at-length novel but I can respect that you'r opinion is you'r own and that my opinion isn't an absolute standard that everyone must follow.
I also find it hypocritical that you comment on his
good storywriting and yet you post a 'wall of text' to point it out.
Ps. Stultus, I'm Five o Fiv'ing all the way through so far! Waidago!
Great Story!
Love the plot and the history. You must have spent a plethora of time with this and for that BRAVO!
I'm still not convinced of the swordsmanship of Rowan. Does the sword give him an inherent knowledge of using it?
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