Farm Girl

Very Nice!!!

Thank you. This was a very enjoyable read. Please continue if you feel the need to complete the tale. It has a lot of potential.

Thank you.

ShrkDivr...

Short, and sweet

Thanks for a refreshingly charming story free of the usual cliches of Literotica. Are these charcters going to have more times together or is this really "the end"?

Great!

Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Doesn't matter whether you add to this one or begin another story, just continue writing please. It was a joy to find this tale waiting to be read here at Literotica. Thank You

I have to agree with the others, it was an excellant story.

It had humor, and was markedly different as well as a very good story. Thank you, sir, for an ecellent read.

Thanks

A simple, straightforward story. Sometimes simple works. It does here.

Clean, spare, real

A simple story, superbly told and full of goodness and the best of humanity.

A dream story.

For a old grumpy guy. This was up lifting.

uplifting

i actualy would love to see a little more of these two, as i think the townspeople would be a little gossipy about this and also to see how they make out down the road

Ended too quickly

Well written. I enjoyed reading it but was surprised how quickly it ended.

Wonderful Story

This was such an wonderful story and it was down to earth. Wish I could find a farm lady like this. Thanks.

liked your story

I agree with another poster, the story could well continue a bit longer. These are two interesting characters and if you are willing, there are a lot more chapters in thier life that we would enjoy reading.

Great story

Keep the stories copping

Sigh!

Got me to wishing once again... Thanks!

What a great little story

Every once in a while somebody posts a gem of a story on this site. This one qualifies as a little gem! Could be a very nice series - push out 3 or 4 or 5 rug rags and grow stuff along the way. Well done.

Great

Amazing little story!

Boyd

A proper story

I really enjoyed it. Thanks.

More please!

Loved your story.
Part 2 please.!

Utterly lovely

I loved every word of this charming story, especially "stanch" ;) The dialogue is realistic and engaging and the character development lends integrity to the story. The simple innocence os both of them, and the realism of the details of farming render this story believable and delightful. I especially loved the little detail in which she compares him to Nellie. That was both comical and delightful. Thank you for a most entertaining and heartwarming read.

Planting seeds is such fun

Most farm girls who live on farms get a sexual education at an early age by watching the livestock. This is a nice erotic story about another farm girl who has to take things into her own hands to get the seeds planted. Thanks.

A brilliant story well written

best short story ive seen for a long while

Beautiful Story

What a beautiful story! The story line and characters are very believeable even if the outcome seems too good to be true.

A beautiful little story - never take any relationship or friendship for granted. Who says the girls cannot take the lead.

Too short but still a pleasure

I'm happy to see a couple more stories in this world, ready and waiting to be read.

It's very difficult to find stories that celebrate the small, but vitally important things in life rather than focus on action, action, action and this was a lovely discovery. My only gripe is that it's too short and lacks the loving detail that would let the reader more deeply into your world :)

Show us the scents of fresh coffee and baking bread in the mornings, the way the crops bow and sway like an inland sea when the wind blows, show us everything about life on a farm in its glories and miseries, show us the way the characters hearts swell with the beauty of the land, or beat hard in frustration when the rain doesn't fall, or when there's too much? The gift of the writer is to let those who will never experience this life for themselves feel and live it through your narrative, your imagination and attention to detail :)