Rob and Ellen Ch. 03

I'm writing a part 4 to this

At least Rob will be a man in it.

Hi Hue

@ Hue I also thought to write an answer story...............I am curiouse to yours, if it is good I give it up my plan.

JPB, I am right, I hate men

two common statements in all JPB stories, they are so well written stories how can you not notice the blatant contempt for men(totally written by a man hating cunt). To those that think other wise put your self in the male leads place(something JPB cant do). Also MM you like JPB are a weak writer, and thats why your writing is so one sided(female much). The fact that MM and JPB can write so well, but still need to punish their male characters time and time again to get off(you both write for yourselves and fuck with readers) is odd, your like a good painter but using all the wrong designs or colors true you paint for yourself but you do it publicly, so we are offended but someone with some skill painting NAZI swastikas all around.

Monkcalm

I bet you are a Stangstar fan. Nothing wrong with that, but his men aways triumph, they never fail, they are always nice guys, and they ALWAYS find a hotter, more loyal woman than any man has ever found ever.

That makes for a certain amount of boredom in the story. I never go into a Stangstar story expecting to hear that the man is an alcoholic loser (and I never go into a MM story expecting NOT to happen...) Rarely it does.

Bob has a lot of different endings. I never know where I am going with a JPB story despite what the naysayers say.

And not to put too fine a point on it, but Bob brings in a lot of content. We could spare quite a few commenters more than we could JPB.

Write your own stories if so many of us are doing it so wrong.

Bob

She is realistic. I can see every rationalization that Ellen makes. If I were a woman who was looking at a huge divorce with almost no hope, I might make the same choices.

But it still twists my boxers to read it as a man. She is doubling down on her poor actions and frankly, she deserved to go home with an STD while preggers.

Stu is an asshole and she really shows little loyalty.

I'd like to write a story of comeuppance...but really, where is the drama? Just a truckload of pain for everyone with no 'win'.

I sincerely doubt her husband would accept what she offered Stu to stay out of her life...and would doubt her protestations of innocence for good and obvious reasons.

It is the bed she made and frankly, she deserves a hit.

If she had fucked Stu again at the last I would have been bitterly disappointed with my author.

I'm glad that she (finally) wised up. Yes, I know that it is just a story.

Still can't decide.

Whether or not to keep her. She's cheated multiple times. But she has to get points for turning Stu away. And she has to get points for getting the DNA test to prove Rob was the father. So I guess the score is 2 points for keeping her (three if you give her a point for loving Rob) and 1 point for dumping the cheating slut. A close score. Well played Bob.

Miserable Worthless Bitch

Keeps cheating while she is trying to get back with husband? Husband is a eunuch. I totally despise all three characters and hope they all die of AIDs. No morals, no scruples, no honesty, just greed offset by stupidity.

terrible story

Wimps-are-us special edition. There is no way she will ever stay loyal anymore than the first time with Stu. Yes, Stu is out because all he is a ass with a cock. But there will certainly be other Stu's in her life. Rob better get used to it.

No

Rob remained celibate all during the pending divorce...she didn't!!!

Just a story but JPB, how can Rob not have discovered her trysts with Stu, after all, she did it right from her job in town and he even saw her with him at a restaurant?

No, this is tough but she eagerly cheated the first time, regretted it later, but then when the divorce was not yet final, she claims she still wants Rob back, she goes ahead and justifies some great fucking...well - Fuck Her!

You always write well Bob but, good grief, can you stop taking a man's man and putting him into wimp/wuss scenarios and ask us to agree...No!!!

Ugh...

...I just threw up in the back of my mouth after reading this story, hoping the entire time Rob would go through with the divorce and toss her cheating cunt out. It would have been fitting if Rob would have found ol' Stu riding in the saddle.

But a great story by the great JPB!

Minus 5

Story sucks! Cheers!

Great story

Is this typical, sadly yes, watch the TV syndicated relationship programs, listen to talk shows that deal with relationships and read Dear Abby or Ann Landers. Trouble here, Ellen did not respect or have deep love for Rob, I feel that Ellen was the type that should have explored more before marriage. Now that Ellen got pregnant by another man, most or some would say think of the baby Rob, in this case, behind his back, she still cheats with Stu? I do not see Rob sticking around and with corporate management and lifestyles which some are back stabbers, I expect many or a few in Ellen's corporation to talk. and Don't forget her big mistake is having lunch and a sex romp in a hotel in their own town. I hope there are a few or at least one more chapter, I expect the DNA to come back as Stu's and Rob does find out the hard way Ellen is still sleeping with Stu. I wish the ending was easier, allow Ellen to simply go away and be with Stu. Ellen allowing this shame to continue is difficult.

Needs closure

and revenge on Stu.

Probably an all too real scenario.

Rob is clueless and will live with it. My biggest problem was with the "who is the father?" issue. I guess there are plenty of guys in the real world who would behave as JBP described Rob. I hope I would not have been one of them, and would have tossed her for the cheating.

Story sucked. Typical cheating slut that Bob loves so well and the

whiny, pitiful bastard husband who will take the bitch back no matter what. She proved that she will continue to cheat and lie and probably get pregnant by another man again. Robbycuck at least lucked out that the little booger was his, or so she says, but the whore can't seem to get good sex from her husband so she will run again. Probably back to Stu, since he is a master cocksman. Poor little Bob, I mean Rob. Pitiful and proud of it.

Kill yourself

Slit your throat, wrists, cut your non-existing dick and balls, just fucking do it.

Too true.

Of the way many women think and act. She got by with it this time but somewhere down the road she will get the itch again and hopefully this time hubby has the smarts to dump her worthless ass. Too many men think that there is only one fish in the ocean, and are not willing to take the chance to get rid of a cheating wife and try to find someone else. Most people typically date only a few dozen people before the get married. There are thousands more that are available that they simply haven't met.

HOW LONG BEFORE SHE GETS CAUGHT AGAIN

she got the cake, the icing, the ice cream and still is satisfied. TK U MLJ LV NV

Pretty standard JPB

Well written story, with a stupid ending. Oh well, at least you never disappoint.

The ending sounds like your life dear annony

so I have it a 5

just plain fag

Wow that sucked.

Terrible Ending

I don't care that it turned out to be Rob's.

Her CONTINUED cheating, even after Rob's decision to give things another chance destroyed any shred of compassion for her.

Better would be someone checking on who she was eating with and finding out his name was "Stu" and have everything blow up in her face. And have the kid be Stu's so that Rob doesn't get screwed in the divorce.

Sex With Dixie

I don’t see why he feels the need to wait. It’s not a question of “revenge” or “getting even”.

The marriage is OVER, they are just waiting for the birth and DNA test.

STUPIDITY SEEMS TO BE FOLLOWING

the stupid ones. TK U MLJ LV NV

This story would end better if her parents visited...

If they had been on vacation somewhere and while starting to fly back, their path to their place would take them past Ellen's home but also ended up going through where she was on travel... which wouldn't matter if they hadn't called ahead to her and Rob's home... which is when he relayed where she was and where she was staying and her room...

And they knock on her room... and she's still in the bathroom... and Stu thinks it's room service and answers the door in a towel... and the gig is up.

Why do people hate this story

Lack of justice.

Looking at the ratings, the first two chapters got high marks for the dramatic tension.

But look at the timeline:

She deliberately fucks around

She continues to fuck around

She gets her life back

Meanwhile, husband is left clueless, hapless and taking back someone much worse than he actually knows. But because HE cannot move on (which makes him seem at least slightly pathetic), she gets a mulligan.

This is TOO realistic. But what makes it even more of a failure is what it does not show. Bob TELLS us she is miserable, that her parents are worried about her mental health etc. But we never see it and when he lets us into her inner mental space, she's more like 'Oh poo! That didn't go well! I guess I better fuck this guy' instead of 'OH MY GOD! HOW DID I FUCK UP MY LIFE SO MUCH!"

I never really got the sense that she regretted what happened. And her rationales for further dalliance is not destroyed, except she will use her diaphragm and shut her 'magic mouth' about any future indiscretions.

One person loves the other much more and they get to suffer because of that love. Her love is not shown at all His is amply displayed. And it is a karmic tragedy to the readers.

once a slut always a slut she will be fucking around pretty soon

I don't think Stu gave up

I think he filed suit and got a DNA test. While it showed he wasn't the Father he was able to talk to Rob in Court and tell him that he'd screwed his wife multiple times. THAT caused the divorce. Rob could never trust her again. The marriage was dead. Even if that didn't happen she would have been cheating soon anyway in search of another thrill ride. What a slut!

a keeper story

wow another day in the life of many married couples... Look at the percentage of husbands not the bio father to wife's child or children... it will blow your mind how high the percentage is...

kill

ellen needs to be stabbed 50 times in her stomach, killing both

One of your best.

I can understand how some of the readers didn't like the story, and especially the ending. She didn't suffer like he did. Sane women don't suffer like men do upon a breakup in a relationship. That's been borne out in more than one study. Women are survivors. Although she appears to not love her husband as much as he loves her, as a practical matter, and if in reality, that's probably not true. She's merely hedging her bets. She's with child, and if Rob doesn't come through, maybe Stu will. She loves Rob more, even though Stu's a better lover, and she even gave him her anal cherry. What a tangled web you wove, but a beautiful web, nonetheless.

i loved this ending.

bleak and vague. sometimes life is like that.

Trash

Wimp is a generous description. None of this is believeable. 1*

Odd tale

I can't say that I really enjoyed this one. It seemed to be made up of rather unbelievable characters whose behavior and reactions were unrealistic.

P.I.

He should of gotten a PI on her case after he found out she was pregnant. Then divorced her cheating ass.

Stupid Story

Lie, cheat on your husband and say you still love him. I say, "Bull Shit" to that. He was nothing short of being a wimp...should of divorced her. She'll keep on cheating on him through out their marriage. She found the thrill of cheating and it excites her.

She's still a fucking slut

Absolutly hated her. And her husband is a cuckold pussy of the highest caliber. You don't make a decision on the basis of 'I miss her.' You miss a comfortable pair of underwear but when they're full of shit you gotta get rid of them. Nobody, I MEAN NOBODY, makes a decision like this and can live with them self. My bet is on either he kills himself within a year or she ends up dying while she's sucking some random guys cock in a car that ends up crashing. 1* all the way.

I suppose in the real world there are men that would forgive this. But thank god I am not one of them. Find another woman who loves you. Obviously this one doesn't.

Latent Slut

She is and was a hot, kiky woman and by her own admission she willfully spent a hot horny night with Stus and loved it.
Even separated from her husband, whom she claims she still loves and wants back, she uses being desperately horny as an excuse to fuck Stu - more than once.
She had earlier admitted to herself that if she had Rob back she would remain hinest...except for when she saw Stu and she admitted that she would do him in a heartbeat.
So in the end, she turns Stu down...right, he came prepared and I guarantee you that when she went to bed she thought about the condoms and thought 'one more time' for old times sake and went looking for him.
My bottom line. This woman will cheat several times over the life of her marriage and it will occasionally be Stu over lunches and occasionally when she is possibly out on Girls night and she gets horny with a stud but - she is a cheater...Period!

i love revenge

stu deserves to be tortured till he begs to be killed ellen needs to be be injected with aids all trespassers deserve the most horrible retribution possible

Pathetic

Pretty sad and disgusting. LOL!

A lot of these should be in the humorous section.

If he's stupid enough to still want her, then he deserves her, . . .

and all the SHIT she brings with her. Maybe one day old Red will win after all.

Good Gosh!

It appears as though some of the commenters can't let a story stand on its on, good or bad. They just don't like it if it doesn't turn out the way they like it. That's usually BTB for both "cheaters". Well done there, Bob. The twist at the end cinched it.

Delusional

Even your characters are puking at what you have them doing.

Just another cuck

The reason why the author writes these stories is he is just another cuck.. He isn't happy unless he is eating another mans cum out of a cunt full of dieseses. He admires a real man.. But can't relate because he is a bitch.. Bonietaylor2 .. You kiss my ass you brain dead bitch.. As for bob .. Your .. Just another cuck