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Just So Elephant

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by Anonymous

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Nice job, O' best beloved.

The best beloved writer on lit has done it again!

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by AzPilot04/09/10

On average, about three chuckles per paragraph plus a five star rating.

Thank you sir, for a fun read.

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by Cedar_Needle04/11/10

Very clever!

Thank you for sharing your wonderful story telling with us! It was entertaining to the last word!

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by Renags2104/11/10

Fantastic!

Your writing is superb and the whimsical rhythm of the paragraphs and sentences is delightfully entertaining.

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by Anonymous04/11/10

Poor Kipling,

but brilliantly done, right down to the mannerisms of his writing style!

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by V_Alcazar04/11/10

As someone who is terribly fond of those stories, this brought me a fine chuckle.

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by DG Hear04/12/10

Now that was differet

...and I learned a few things. Don't give elephants donuts. Thanks for the smiles Og.
DG

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by Handley_Page04/13/10

Pure Magic.

Loved it!

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by past_perfect04/14/10

Great

Brilliantly done, Ogg. Loved it.

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by mia_erotica04/20/10

Great story!

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by NaokoSmith06/01/14

Exceedingly Good

Ogg, you are hilarious and always a great treat to read. =D

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