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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
The real question is "where?".

Where does this story belong? Does Lit.com have a "snuff" category?

That is where this really belongs...certainly not anywhere near "Loving Wives". I am sure that there are some who get off on the killing of slut wives, and they deserve their own category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
4 stars

That was different. Some slut wives just don't know when to quit do they? Nice ending. Far better than most.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
relax

it's less violent than some things cucks go through in some stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Of Course

This is the way most husbands would react when pushed this hard, pun intended. Different.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
And I'm one of 'em.....

....now reload and nail the scum that would fuck a married woman.

jasonnhjasonnhabout 14 years ago
This is what can happen when

... you start messing around with emotions and sex. If you had told me 30 years ago that people could be this stupid, to engage in sex like this and then think it doesn't mean anything, to just excuse it like they forgot to pay the electric bill, I wouldn't have understood it or believed that they could be so misguided. But I know that people can be this dumb. I'm not into gratuitous murder. She deserved to have her ass kicked. There is a high cost for betrayal and stupidity. But she really didn't act maliciously, just unbelievably stupidly. And then he did as well. He started by getting in line to fuck her. If he was really upset with her how dumb was that?

littleblackdress50littleblackdress50about 14 years ago
good luck

good luck in the contest

chytownchytownabout 14 years ago
SAD!!!

And boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Too Drastic

Cheating has consequences...but the death penalty is a bit drastic!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
Scary

Sadly the story is close to real life and what happens a lot.

Good story telling, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wow

What a buzz killer of an ending, thanks! Sounds like the writer has some unresolved issues with a past or current relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Fantasic - love a great ending. Of course, the male character should be able to beat the charges [insanity?]. Unfortunately, because this male character is not a celebrity - he won't get a chance to get into "rehab".

Great ending - only wish that JPB, Angie and MattM's stories were even close to being somewhat being this realistic. The sorry bitch deserved it and probably enjoyed the "pain/pleasure" aspect of the ordeal. Well done, author [wish more authors had the guts to write decent endings like this]. Debra and Wayne

lancewmlancewmabout 14 years ago
Too much change in his attitude...

You portrayed the guy as too easy going, and he was going to forgive her.... then abruptly murder... didn't make sense given the characterization.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
I didn't have a problem with it

I wonder how many men are sitting on death row or servinge 30 years for doing the same thing for catching a cheating wife?

There are some things you just can't get over !

Watching your life flush down the toilet can have a real effect, and send you to a dark side where consequences for this kind of action don't mean shit!

Welcome to reality!

Thanks for writing!

saratusaratuabout 13 years ago
This was,

A very cool story and yes I liked the ending!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Killing a cheating wife is not murder

--it's justice.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 10 years ago
Oh Yeah

Fucking cunt. That's what happens to an open cheating whore wife.

In fantasy anyway.

Five stars

ErotFanErotFanover 9 years ago
As much as I liked the story...

... I enjoyed the comments even more.

Finally a story that ends as I suspect many sudden discovery's do. If not murder; at least with a hellova beating.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
Good for her...

Good for her to die...But all 5 men went away and he had gone to prison...That's not a good ending...If was to kill he should have killed all of them in the beginning...Go to jail but kill all the 5 cheaters...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
simple and direct

instinct doesn't care about questions, now she'll never betray him again.

why? because she broke the law of the jungle

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
WHO CAN BELIEVE HER LAST QUESTION

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
"Why?"

"Because you took me for granted and disrespected me. This is where that, and you, both stop."

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 2 years ago

I can't say that I understand why he got in line, but the rage I do understand.

jimjam69jimjam69over 2 years ago

Nice dark story. Only fault I saw was that he left witnesses.

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