by TexHubby
...it's a crock of shit. That's what fantasy usually is. I give it a thumbs up and a full dick up. That's my measure of the story's value. Thanks! Write more please.
.....is that in juxtaposition with the plethora of cuck shit infesting loving wives this tale seems somewhat loving. I'd be willing to bet though that behind every desire to see slut wife is the inability to own up to the responsibility of commitment.
you gonna give us your entire story? Darned hot story.
For all commenters who try to tell authors that cuckold stories do not belong in the Loving Wives category, the owner of the site has made it perfectly clear that the Loving Wives story is intended to include cuckold stories.
See the owner's comments in the Literotica forum in the Story Feed Back board under a thread titled "Loving Wives category." It is post number #103 in that thread.
Now that you know the owner of the site, who makes the rules and not you, intends for cuckold stories to go in Loving Wives category, are you still going to snipe and leave angry comments for cuckold stories being posted in Loving Wives? If so, you are trying to be the owner and make the rules when you are not the owner.
Thank you ALL for your critiques. I wholeheartedly encourage your continued support for the Literotica site. No two beings are alike and that's what's great about Literotica... there's something here for everyone's tastes and likes. It's the whole "Diff'rent Strokes" mentality.
I honestly thank everyone for their comments. I'm not a writer. I'm just a normal man who uses writing as an outlet. I'm happily married to a beautiful woman whom I love and respect and who loves and respects me. Take these stories for what they are... pure fiction. Have an awesome day everyone. And thanks again. TexHubby
And that's the final judgment. She just played the role for his enjoyment. She took a huge risk turning fantasy into reality in such a dramatic way but she got away with it. I couldn't stand for my wife to act like this with another guy. Be a slut, sure, with me. But the story is a valid one and the couple seems happy. No one is really being abused so the story "conflict" is resolved. It was OK, just not my thing.
I wanna thank you for for clearing that up for me. At least hubby was able to get in touch with his inner wimp, and his cock at the same time. Which I'm sure is some kind of epiphany.
Wimps like this guy are found in a ditch with their balls cut out in Texas.
At least you admit to being gay or "bi" so thats out of the way, this is not something any husband I know would do, but they are all stright. Didn't do a thing for me but good luck, I think you need it.
If a man is a cuckold and a wimp by choice.................tat mean he is either a transsexual or a queer.
I feel that the author is one of them. Since his fantasies include getting cuckolded by wife.
Wimps like this are castrated not only in Texas but anywhere populate by true blue heterosexual men. Wimps have little use of their dormant dicks.
It does not ring my bell, but I thought that it was better done than many other such tales. If I knew where I was tieing my horse, I would have kept riding. What does puzzle me is the desire to cut cocks off of wimps expressed my so-many colleagues. If you want to get more tail you should leave the wimps alone and start cutting the "real men" that way you will have less problems when you feel like moving in on some babe......
Distasteful extremely boring!
It's interesting the homophobic arousal in earlier comments. I've always learned that the ones who protest the most...
Well, I'm sure they will fully enjoy their time in the prison system.
I didn't see this as a cuckold tale as much as an opening of people and especially the flowering of her sensuality. Nice story line, could be tighter, writing is good, but more passion (although it's passionate in descriptions of the wife).
Tell us do you Texans also fuck Donkeys! God you Yanks are total wuss ass castrated cuckolds! If it wasn't for your Guns and Women you would be irrelevant in this world. And you wonder why you are hated through the world?
Calling this bitch a slut and a whore, and no problem calling him a cuck. Definitely no problem calling this story crap.
I perceive Another worthless stupid cuck story. I also perceive the author taking a permanent place in my "Do not read, EVER!" list.