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by Anonymous04/13/10

nice

love your voice but you could tell you were reading it rather than imagining it,ive listened to others of yours n loved them,you really do have a sensual voice sharon xx

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by sensualsharon04/13/10

Thanks......

Well,it IS a story,can't memorize all of that! I wrote it at least! Didn't bother submitting the written part,but can if someone wants me to. Just thought I'd submit the audio portion of it. Another author on here has asked me to narrate ones he's written. Let me know if any of you would like that.

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by Anonymous04/13/10

great voice but your other work is better

Definitely sounds like your reading a story. Would rather hear you do your stories the way you've done in the past. I don't like when stories are read like this. Would rather hear you talk as if you we're talking to us, like in your other stories.

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by Anonymous04/14/10

Very nice, but...

I'd Love to hear one of MY fantasies with your voice reading it ... But careful, you'll be VERY quickly overwhelmed with requests, if you're not careful! Nicely read, though I have to admit to preferring the immediacy (and hearing you get worked yourself!) of the 'stream of interaction conversation' that your previous postings showed off - particularly your guided masturbation recording. Wow - VERY nice!

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by bluestarz04/14/10

Disregard criticism

Some people don't understand that this IS a story site. I guess you raised expectations (along with something else ;) ) by your previous postings.
I think it was the spontaneity of your earlier tales. In any case, your voice is so captivating to me, it didn't matter. I liked it all. I wish I was Todd. Lucky guy. Please continue to post more.

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by pavlov04/14/10

Not hot enough

I consider this as a well-written story, and your voice is really hot, too. But I didn't like the long conversations, I could have used a more detailed description of the actual love making.

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by Anonymous04/16/10

A story as it is

At first I thought you're good at writing. A lot of smart words and a university at least. But the erotic side of you is what I crave for ) Millions of stories on the net - what do hundreds of men hunt for here? - Real WOMAN at her best.

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by Anonymous04/22/10

Unbelievably sexy

I nearly came in my pants while recently flying on a airplane while listening to you latest stories. The lady next to me couldn't figure out why I was squirming. You have an amazing voice and a talent for capturing the sensual imagination.

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by qarlcue06/14/10

Creative, sexy mind.... Soothing, teasing voice!

Sharon,

You do such a great job of describing the background efficiently without rushing to the intense parts. The story is tight, but filled out enough to satisfy. And the best part is hearing you read it! Keep 'em coming!

-Carl

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