All Comments on 'Birthday Gift'

I love an author that is not afraid to use vocabulary. I was right there with the descriptions, stroking along as she flexed and moaned. What a pleasurable description of intromission.

Please write more.

Great pace, very arousing. Very descriptive.

For a sister-in-law like you! Life would be so sweet. Delicious tale, Sweetie.

The "you did this" approach is so awkward - the story, any story, would be so much better if written in a different point of view. Otherwise, your writing is very good. I will look for more.