I have never been to a BDSM club but would it be more interesting like the one in the story? Is MC an author? Oh! You mean a club. Living in North Wales is a bit out of the way. You may be glad to know the stories get more heavy as they go along, thanks for the comment. You could alwsy email me with info about a real club.
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Anonymous10/28/10
Loved it more please
I look forward to continuing reading this story and the future parts you provide us with. Thanks
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Anonymous02/28/13
Dumber than a stump?
Can't believe anyone is that dumb. Which made the rest of the story unbelievable. And there's no sense in reading further. Dumb. Dumb. Dumb.
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Anonymous10/25/15
Wirecutters? Hello?
Who needs a blasted key? Just get a pair of wirecutters for gosh sakes, & cut the stupid earrings off!
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Anonymous12/26/15
pretty good beginning
Not too hot, not to cold, just like the little bear's porridge; not too fast, leaving out interesting detail except the hurt and the glow of getting her ass spanked and then Caned. More physical and emotional response is called for here, and the mechanics of baring her bottom for the spanking are a little bit sketchy and not nearly traumatizing enough; not too slow and overall very good.
PS. Did she wear her collar at home and how did that make her feel? Thanks for the story.
DHL
English
Excellent opening
Really like the long first chapter, gets us into the action and hope for some hot events ahead.
sexy pair
This is fun. Keep it up!
soooooooo fun
luv the way you write! it seems so real!!
interesting story
I can however, tell you don't frequent BDSM clubs very often if at all.
I like the way you write but like the MC stories better than this one
I will still read the next chapter though :)
your right
I have never been to a BDSM club but would it be more interesting like the one in the story? Is MC an author? Oh! You mean a club. Living in North Wales is a bit out of the way. You may be glad to know the stories get more heavy as they go along, thanks for the comment. You could alwsy email me with info about a real club.
Loved it more please
I look forward to continuing reading this story and the future parts you provide us with. Thanks
Dumber than a stump?
Can't believe anyone is that dumb. Which made the rest of the story unbelievable. And there's no sense in reading further. Dumb. Dumb. Dumb.
Wirecutters? Hello?
Who needs a blasted key? Just get a pair of wirecutters for gosh sakes, & cut the stupid earrings off!
pretty good beginning
Not too hot, not to cold, just like the little bear's porridge; not too fast, leaving out interesting detail except the hurt and the glow of getting her ass spanked and then Caned. More physical and emotional response is called for here, and the mechanics of baring her bottom for the spanking are a little bit sketchy and not nearly traumatizing enough; not too slow and overall very good.
PS. Did she wear her collar at home and how did that make her feel? Thanks for the story.
DHL
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