All Comments on 'Bathing Nocturne'

by vrosej10

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
You knew I would love this

didn't you?

It made me wet!

fridayamfridayamabout 14 years ago
Lovely images

beautiful setting. Very fine. That first line is so good.

normal jeannormal jeanover 13 years ago
I like this one

but it would be more effective if you changed some of the gerunds into active verbs. very nice images. you are a talent growing stronger with each post.

~ NJ

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