All Comments on 'The Beach'

Do you have experience with doing a rape kit or did you do ANY research?

That was yucky. May be you are the rapist so you know all the details.

When describing a large quantity the correct term is "a lot". The verb "allot" means "assign to".

I suggest a volunteer editor (see the Editor's Forum).

Impulsive weak plot used by a hosts of like writers and"unbelievable" fiction at best.A rape charge will end the life of the bum and may be used as a f... toy by Bubba in jail.Write a sequel if you dare.

Now we need part two, that lets us know what this sexy sexy married white women was wearing at the beach. A hot pink tiny g-string, tits barely contained, sweet ass on display. How she teased the poor black bum till his Huge powerful Black Cock couldn't take it any more.

This story is a mess with whatever the author is trying to convey is all over the place and lacking focus. Also any "SVU" investigator would be at least at the Detective level whether it's New York,Chicago,L.A. or East Bumpkinville.

where are we goin here?

maybe she loved it and wants more?

how will she find him

sounds like she has never had it so good and wants

to be taken again

Even ignoring the sloppy style and deeply unrealistic dialogue, how do you justify placing this in a category containing the word 'love'?

What a sloppy and unimaginative work. Plus the subject- interracial love??? Hello, wake up you SHMOCK!!!Wher is the LOVE? Gave you 1

let's see how much the spade who did that likes a single barrel 12 gauge shoved up his ass.

I couldn't get past them talking about measuring the penis size. How do you do that on a rape victim? I kept thinking that the penis must still be in there and was wondering how that happened.

this submission is in no way erotic. Sorry steviecom, but your "work" reeks more than does your victim.

Nasty fucking story. Another nice white wife fucks a nigger. She will be dirty now forever.D

I can already see where this shit is going. Kind of different coming at a black fucking from this angle, after the fact. Still, its nothing but a wife giving in to a big nigger dick. I hate to see a nice white family ruined like this but I do want to find out what happened to the white bitch. That's all she is now, a blackened slut.

I never knew in all the years I watched Grissom on CSI that victims were treated like that. This would be a good show. Maybe a screen play is next? Who could we get to play her? Part 3 coming?