All Comments on 'A Couple's Voyage Into Sexuality Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Just Really Stupid

But perhaps you have a marriage like this, or used to, before the divorce.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Arthur is back

Who is Arthur?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Good story and I like the series theme. Only complaint is that it's not well edited. Lots of switched names 'Arthur' instead of 'Edward' or Robert - Edward confusion. A few missing letters in words as well. 'Had' instead if 'hand'. Keep writing and let someone edit.

AndrewmsailingAndrewmsailingalmost 10 years ago
I quit

This is a steamy tale totally spoiled by carelessness. I find it so irritating that despite my curiosity I quit.

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