All Comments on 'Battered Ch. 04'

I thought u left us hanging for minute there, but glad 2 c u'r back. Like I said b4, its abt 2 hit the fan. Luke is gonna see her face and its gonna be a "that mofo" type episode, I think lol. But Hal's gettin her confidence back, so there's hope. As always, thanks for the update.

So happy to see that Hal is breaking out of her shell and finding herself again, hopefully we can see her advance more and see her evolve more on her own as a woman, mother, provider, etc. because she can't rely on Lucas solely to be strong enough for her when she HOPEFULY leaves Jeremey for good, she needs to stand on her own. But I hope she doesn't continue to be on a tight rope of stradding herself between Jeremey and Lucas nor continue to make excuses for her so called "husband" actions and behavior. GREAT story, I find this very realistic and the characters are so flawed in a good way, keep up the writing and can't wait to see what happens with Chapter 5

let hallee find the truth why jeremy is like that. let hallee have some balls to do the right thing and not endanger her and santana. think of the child, not just of hallee. i do not condone affairs so i hope hallee would do this right - stop being a battered person.

your writing is great, its very realistic and I guess that's why I find it so painful... she is nevertheless an idiot.

but please please tell me at some point she is going to go burning bed on his ass, or do a bobbit,

WHY? Why can't she just leave him. I want Lucas to go and beat his ass. It's okay...I'm calm. lol. Great update. I've been waiting for it.

for old girl to have a cast-iron skillet somewhere close by and go upside his head, repeatedly! I was hoping that some implement of destruction was in the bathroom...update soon? If for no other reason that to just rub it in my face that you can and I can't?

I know that women who generally experiance domestic violence don't leave untill they're dead or it's to late, and they give many excuse (lame ones) for not leaving. I know this yet I will never have sympathy for them because they are not only putting their lives in danger but their children. They say they luv them and won't leave cuz of their children but wat life can a child hav with a beat up mom and a violent dad?

Now that Hallee knows what it feels like to have a REAL man love her maybe she will back up the brave talk she had at the end and leave Jeremy's sorry ass. The love scene between Luke and Hallee was HOT! Time to call the bf for a quickie lol. The AI scene was hilarious and I loved this chapter nevermind the shortness. It was perfect! Can't wait for chapter 5!

Leaving the guy I used to be with took him trying to run over me with a car and missing.... I don't have a kid, but I know what she feels like.... When this happens to you, its like getting over it is worse than the act itself. You keep saying its my fault, its my fault... Once you get over that... than you can live.

It is a sad situation and the story has dept to it. I do like reading stories here even though the site erotic there are stories with so much more to offer. It reminds me to my parents and there situation but I am still able to enjoy reading it.

Hard to feel sorry for her but I'm happy she stood up to him..the prick