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by butters04/18/10

glad PandoraGlitters brought this one to our attention

this builds on itself as it rolls on, and that final verse leaves a big impression on me. nice write!

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by tazz31704/28/12

CLOSING TIME OR QUITTING TIME

both are reluctant to end, TK U MLJ LV NV

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