All Comments on 'Demon from A Dream'

Good but you needed some editing help - a few grammer, spelling, word choice issues.

NEEDS CHECKING FOR SPELLING , AND FORM , LOOKS LIKE THIS COULD EVOLVE INTO A SERIES

very hot ;-]

i love demons <3

You need to write more.

I love Demon stories, loved how they met and how the characters ended up together. Great story.

This is . . . well . . . cold. Some of your sentences are uncomfortably odd; and it all felt like I was watching a bad movie. It had the same vibe as a 13 year old's bad fanfiction about Twilight. You have good ideas, but you lack some skills. Keep writing.

I'd like to read the next chaper.

You should really write more stories like this. No matter what anybody says you should keep writing

Greatly narrated, No words, it just filled my heart with content.... I felt it happened in front my eyes or dream.... Expecting more as such from you.... The writer 😀