All Comments on 'Student Lesbian BDSM'

Nicely written with a little bit of suspense and teasing tossed just right to create a very good story line that begs for additional chapters in the growth of both characters

You show a good grasp of blending the narrative with the eroticism. I look forward to reading more of your work.

... From the accents to the figures.

But please let us know what happens next. :-)

An excellent start with lots of lovely detail and action.

I wanna join in as a sub.