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Student Lesbian BDSM

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/21/10

Fantastic Start of a wnderful story line

Nicely written with a little bit of suspense and teasing tossed just right to create a very good story line that begs for additional chapters in the growth of both characters

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by Bob_Aganoush04/21/10

very nice story

You show a good grasp of blending the narrative with the eroticism. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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by victoria.vixen04/22/10

I like the attention to detail...

... From the accents to the figures.

But please let us know what happens next. :-)

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by Dryhill08/14/11

EXCELLENT

An excellent start with lots of lovely detail and action.

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