by brian473317
Really interesting. Oscar needs to do more for himself. In Chapt. 3 he looked into the mirror. Can he change himself? He needs to develop ongoing relationships with about three or more women.
Although strange, I like your story very much. Not like the typical mind control story. I'd like it continued of course just the way it's going. He's an every manlike most of us with average hopes and dreams.
are planning on continuing or is this the end of the story? I thought and hoped there was more.
I really liked this story and wished the writer continued this. Either way, I just want to write and tell the author what an amazing story and thank you